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Reviewer #2: The submission reports the synthesis of YZM-G. It is acceptable for publication if the authors can revise it by addressing the following points:


1.The authors stated: "¡­the YZM-G with an average diameter of about 3 m are surrounded by graphene films" and "¡­the core is assembled from ZnO nanoparticles and the shell is composed of ZnO nanodisks.". However, these conclusions should be supported by evidence (analysis results). Please add the structure/composition analysis results to evidence where and what it is.

2The formation mechanism for the YZM-G is not clear. The explanation about the formation mechanism doesn't match the observed structure (SEM image). Please explain how the core, shell, GO in a single YZM-G particle form in position and time sequence.

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Yolk-shell ZnO microsphere-graphene composites (YZM-G) were synthesized by a facile one-pot route, whose average diameter was about 3 um with ZnO nanoparticles as 10 core and ZnO nanodisks as shell.

On the basis of the results presented above and previous works by others, a possible mechanism for the formation of YZM-G was proposed in Figure 3.


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