24小时热门版块排行榜    

查看: 2822  |  回复: 9

haolanruoran

木虫 (正式写手)

[求助] materials letters response to reviews相关问题

I am pleased to confirm that your paper "xxx" has been accepted for publication in Materials Letters. Please note the minor edits that are required, which are mentioned below. In the interest of rapid publication we are asking you to make the changes at proof stage.
状态栏也是accept ,这个是表示接收了嘛,是不是不会拒了。 但是又说小修(小修状态栏不应该是minor review嘛? ),小修也有被拒的可能啊。。。求解释。。。

You will shortly receive an acknowledgement letter from the Editorial-Production Journals Department with further administrative instructions.

Upon receipt of the Author Proof, please incorporate the below Editor suggestions as corrections. DO NOT SEND A CORRECTED MANUSCRIPT NOW, OR AT PROOF STAGE; CORRECTIONS MUST BE MADE ON THE PROOFS!

Thank you for submitting your work to this journal.

Reviewer #2: The submission reports the synthesis of YZM-G. It is acceptable for publication if the authors can revise it by addressing the following points:


1.The authors stated: "…the YZM-G with an average diameter of about 3 m are surrounded by graphene films" and "…the core is assembled from ZnO nanoparticles and the shell is composed of ZnO nanodisks.". However, these conclusions should be supported by evidence (analysis results). Please add the structure/composition analysis results to evidence where and what it is.

2The formation mechanism for the YZM-G is not clear. The explanation about the formation mechanism doesn't match the observed structure (SEM image). Please explain how the core, shell, GO in a single YZM-G particle form in position and time sequence.

3. English is clear. But there are some band-sructured or inappropriate expressions or sentences (Examples include but are not limited to the followings). Please re-edit English carefully.

Yolk-shell ZnO microsphere-graphene composites (YZM-G) were synthesized by a facile one-pot route, whose average diameter was about 3 um with ZnO nanoparticles as 10 core and ZnO nanodisks as shell.

On the basis of the results presented above and previous works by others, a possible mechanism for the formation of YZM-G was proposed in Figure 3.


以上为审稿意见,第一条不知道是不是要求补充数据啊,add the structure/composition analysis results   感觉SEM可以看清形貌,是不是要求做EDS以证明形貌中不同形貌的组分各是什么呢?
第二条 Please explain how the core, shell, GO in a single YZM-G particle form in position and time sequence.是不是要求把单独核壳的形成讲清楚( ⊙ o ⊙ )啊!  (英语比较差,呵呵)
第三条,这两句那位大侠可以给帮忙改改啊,感激不尽啊。其中第二句是模板句型啊,不知道哪里不对哦,也请大家帮忙给帮帮忙哈

再次感谢,好心的虫友们!
回复此楼

» 猜你喜欢

» 本主题相关价值贴推荐,对您同样有帮助:

学习ing
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

haolanruoran

木虫 (正式写手)

急等好心人啊。。。我是不是什么也不用做直接等proof啊,可是感觉要改的地方挺多的,一般直接接受的话,等proof 不是都是几个很小的问题吗

在线急等啊,求好心虫友给力哈
学习ing
2楼2013-04-27 10:58:46
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

raymon7805

银虫 (职业作家)

【答案】应助回帖

★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★
感谢参与,应助指数 +1
haolanruoran: 金币+10, ★★★很有帮助, 谢谢 十分有用 2013-04-27 12:19:03
编辑注意到了,他说了为了加快出版速度,所以等Proof时一起改。。。!!到时候proof时把改动的对方加进去就可以了!!!
坚持原则,踏实做事
3楼2013-04-27 11:04:57
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

LifePursuit

木虫之王 (文学泰斗)

【答案】应助回帖

★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★
感谢参与,应助指数 +1
haolanruoran: 金币+10, ★★★很有帮助, 谢谢哈,那我现在就是要等那个proof,然后直接在上面修改吗,proof不是pdf格式的嘛,那怎么在上面修改呢,另外,万一补数据又怎么填上去呢?proof改好后是不是还要写response to reviewer注明那些地方有改动啊 2013-04-27 12:11:09
基本没问题了,恭喜!记得给币币哦

1. 能补数据就补,实在不能补就委婉的说明。一般不会在这里卡你了。

2. 你的理解是对的。需要装模作样的阐述一下形成机理,比如说谁先形成谁后形成,过程中分别形成了什么形貌,处于什么位置(核还是壳),等等。

3. Yolk-shell ZnO microsphere-graphene composites (YZM-G) were synthesized by a facile one-pot route, whose average diameter was about 3 um with ZnO nanoparticles as 10 core and ZnO nanodisks as shell.

这一句会有歧义。首先,whose至少要跟着composites(建议英语不好的话少用所谓的“从句”,不光不会让文章显得“高深”,反而很别扭)。其次,ZnO nanoparticles as (the) core and ZnO nanodisks as (the) shell指的是谁?如果是yolk,那么要单独一句写清楚,而不是在这里混在从句中。

On the basis of previous reports [参考文献] and our results...
4楼2013-04-27 11:26:59
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

zhoupeng87

版主 (文学泰斗)

优秀版主优秀版主

【答案】应助回帖

★ ★
感谢参与,应助指数 +1
haolanruoran: 金币+2 2013-04-27 12:19:41
基本上没多大问题了,祝你好运
5楼2013-04-27 11:32:41
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

haolanruoran

木虫 (正式写手)

引用回帖:
3楼: Originally posted by raymon7805 at 2013-04-27 11:04:57
编辑注意到了,他说了为了加快出版速度,所以等Proof时一起改。。。!!到时候proof时把改动的对方加进去就可以了!!!

谢谢哈,那我现在就是要等那个proof,这个一般等多久呢?说的是shortly,可是已经三天了,还是没有收到邮件啊。
然后直接在上面修改吗,proof不是pdf格式的嘛,那怎么在上面修改呢,另外,万一补数据又怎么填上去呢?proof改好后是不是还要写response to reviewer注明那些地方有改动啊
学习ing
6楼2013-04-27 12:18:27
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

haolanruoran

木虫 (正式写手)

引用回帖:
5楼: Originally posted by zhoupeng87 at 2013-04-27 11:32:41
基本上没多大问题了,祝你好运

借你吉言,希望早日搞定啊     不知道这个proof还要等多久哦?
学习ing
7楼2013-04-27 12:20:36
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

xrdm345

木虫 (正式写手)

【答案】应助回帖

★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★
感谢参与,应助指数 +1
haolanruoran: 金币+10, ★★★很有帮助, O(∩_∩)O谢谢 2013-04-28 09:23:44
1、用acrobat可以修改pdf文件,也可以按照××页××行 的方式提供一个修改list;
2、可以将意见中要修改的内容一起列到修改list里面,另外在给一个response。
3、都到了pulication office一般不会拒了,拒稿都是在编辑手里拒。
8楼2013-04-28 08:27:39
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

zjtgg007

金虫 (正式写手)

【答案】应助回帖

★ ★ ★ ★ ★
感谢参与,应助指数 +1
haolanruoran: 金币+5 2013-04-28 09:24:02
修改回复是必须的,修改完了才能接受,现在离proof还早呢,一般签著作权协议才能会proof
9楼2013-04-28 08:36:02
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

haolanruoran

木虫 (正式写手)

引用回帖:
9楼: Originally posted by zjtgg007 at 2013-04-28 08:36:02
修改回复是必须的,修改完了才能接受,现在离proof还早呢,一般签著作权协议才能会proof

可是不是说会收到acknowledgement letter。收到Author Proof之后直接在上面修改啊  审稿是这样说的啊
You will shortly receive an acknowledgement letter from the Editorial-Production Journals Department with further administrative instructions.

Upon receipt of the Author Proof, please incorporate the below Editor suggestions as corrections. DO NOT SEND A CORRECTED MANUSCRIPT NOW, OR AT PROOF STAGE; CORRECTIONS MUST BE MADE ON THE PROOFS!
不太懂哎,求解释   谢谢了
学习ing
10楼2013-04-28 09:29:53
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖
相关版块跳转 我要订阅楼主 haolanruoran 的主题更新
最具人气热帖推荐 [查看全部] 作者 回/看 最后发表
[基金申请] 国自然面上复盘~欢迎讨论 +4 晴天加油 2026-08-26 5/250 2026-08-26 21:27 by 木风9012
[基金申请] 系统查不到 +10 董八千 2026-08-26 10/500 2026-08-26 16:30 by Equinoxhua
[基金申请] 2026国自然函评费到账 +22 羊腰板 2026-08-21 25/1250 2026-08-26 15:00 by zuocuiping
[基金申请] 2026年8月25日国自然放榜前突然收到列入评审专家邮件,有关系吗? +25 木水思豆 2026-08-25 28/1400 2026-08-26 14:53 by draco1987
[基金申请] 能否退出参与的面上项目解除限项 +23 koalala 2026-08-24 26/1300 2026-08-26 14:29 by 宝贝虫子
[基金申请] 科研孤儿太难了 +21 我4大白菜 2026-08-20 22/1100 2026-08-26 11:29 by nlgza
[基金申请] 国合里面能看到了 +7 一怀馨秋 2026-08-26 7/350 2026-08-26 11:23 by zhaosm1982
[基金申请] 国际合作可查了,中了面上 +18 Ldrop2023 2026-08-26 18/900 2026-08-26 11:15 by cmrandy
[基金申请] 怎么看青基中了没有啊 +4 叶九微 2026-08-26 4/200 2026-08-26 10:52 by xiacongxu
[基金申请] 国合可查了 +3 paperzjh 2026-08-26 3/150 2026-08-26 10:41 by LemmonTr
[基金申请] 国合现在查不到了吗? +10 chengyan1220 2026-08-24 20/1000 2026-08-26 08:57 by peasantsprig
[基金申请] 在坚冰还盖着北海的时候,我看到了怒放的梅花。 (金币+10) +6 ziyangfang 2026-08-25 9/450 2026-08-25 20:26 by huagongfeihu
[基金申请] 如果此刻你正在为国基感到焦虑,不妨来听听这首《基金之外》 +8 scalable 2026-08-24 8/400 2026-08-25 12:52 by jnhyjjm
[基金申请] 没有任何消息-是不是就凉了 +9 图啦图啦 2026-08-24 10/500 2026-08-25 11:59 by 南海小哥
[基金申请] 我面上完蛋了 +13 且听虎啸 2026-08-20 14/700 2026-08-25 09:10 by mrkang
[基金申请] 建议基金发布提前给出明确的时间点 +13 kulium 2026-08-21 16/800 2026-08-24 16:27 by superceng
[基金申请] 让我中一个面上吧! +13 大萍1987 2026-08-20 16/800 2026-08-24 10:23 by 太傻了
[基金申请] 看来今天不会放榜了? +8 chengyan1220 2026-08-21 11/550 2026-08-21 17:52 by dcqxinyang
[基金申请] 应该是下周三26日公布了吧? +4 哈哈蛤? 2026-08-21 4/200 2026-08-21 10:58 by Vivilian
[基金申请] 基金啊基金 +4 longfie172 2026-08-20 4/200 2026-08-21 08:58 by mark mao
信息提示
请填处理意见