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[求助] 润色一句话(36个字),材料类,中译英。谢谢!【急!在线等!】

在裂纹扩展过程中,存在一些与主裂纹断开的孤立的微小空洞,这些微小空洞将成为新的裂纹萌生之地。

翻译:During crack propagation, around the main cracks there are some disconnect isolated small cavities, which will become new cracks.
该翻译优点:后面部分挺好的,which 清晰的指代 small cavities
         不足:红色字体部分“around the main cracks there are ” 感觉比较怪。
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During crack propagation, there are some disconnect isolated small cavities around the main cracks, which will become new cracks.
该翻译优点:前面很通顺。
         不足:which 很容易变成 the main cracks (错误指代)


请高手帮润色,尽量简明扼要,符合科研英语表述。
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八角寨: 金币+1, ★★★很有帮助, 非常感谢。 2013-04-08 17:00:07
During crack propagation,  there are some disconnect isolated small cavities, which will become new cracks,around the main cracks.插入语作同位语,进一步解释前面名词。
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行云流水吧

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八角寨: 金币+4, ★★★很有帮助, 谢谢。 2013-04-08 16:59:21
During crack propagation,  some disconnect isolated small cavities existed around the main cracks, which will become new cracks. 分词短语作定语修饰前面的主语,which指代主语
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八角寨: 金币+2, ★有帮助, 谢谢。 2013-04-08 16:59:36
During crack propagation, there are some isolated small cavities disconnected from the main cracks , and they will become new cracks.
在裂纹扩展过程中,存在一些与主裂纹断开的孤立的微??空洞,这些微??空洞将??为新的裂纹???生之地。
During crack propagation, form some isolated small cavities disconnected from the main cracks , and they will become new cracks.
寥寥数年、将就过活
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八角寨: 金币+8, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案, 谢谢专家。 2013-04-08 16:58:58
在裂纹扩展过程中,存在一些与主裂纹断开的孤立的微小空洞,这些微小空洞将成为新的裂纹萌生之地。
Ref:  During the crack progagatoin process, some small isolated cavities disconneted from the main cracks will be the initiation sites for new cracks.
where-there-is-a-will-there-is-a-way.
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