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[求助] 帮我润色一段英语,自己写的,使它更流畅一些。

下面是我做的汉译英,感觉怪怪的,大家帮我润色一下。谢谢。
Various interface microstructures between coating and substrate were designed and prepared to study the effect of interface microstructure on damping.

Samples with different interface microstructure was respectivly denoted by S1, S2 and S3. 6 The substrate and coating of samples S1, S2 and S3 were the Ni-based high-temperature alloy and the NiCrAlY coatings, respectively, and the coatings were prepared by air plasma sprayed.

(1) Sample S1: the interface thickness was 5.0μm and interface defect rate was 22%.
(2) Sample S2: the interface thickness was 13.4μm and interface defect rate was 23.7% .
(3) Sample S3: the interface thickness was 12.6μm and interface defect rate was 16.5%.
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wxqtjw: 金币+1, 翻译EPI+1 2013-04-06 17:57:12
wxqtjw: 金币+3 2013-04-10 22:28:00
Samples with different interface microstructure were denoted as S1, S2 and S3, respectivly. The substrates of samples were the Ni-based high-temperature alloys, and the coatings of the samples are the NiCrAlY coatings, which were prepared by air plasma sprayed.
(1) Sample S1: the interface thickness is 5.0μm and the interface defect rate is 22%.
(2) Sample S2: the interface thickness is 13.4μm and the interface defect rate is 23.7% .
(3) Sample S3: the interface thickness is 12.6μm and the interface defect rate is 16.5%.
第一句翻译得很好,无需修改。
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wxqtjw: 金币+2 2013-04-06 17:57:17
wxqtjw: 金币+3 2013-04-10 22:28:05
以这次为准
Samples with different interface microstructure are denoted as S1, S2 and S3, respectivly. The substrates of samples are the Ni-based high-temperature alloys, and the coatings of the samples are the NiCrAlY coatings, which are prepared by air plasma sprayed.
(1) Sample S1: the interface thickness is 5.0μm and the interface defect rate is 22%.
(2) Sample S2: the interface thickness is 13.4μm and the interface defect rate is 23.7% .
(3) Sample S3: the interface thickness is 12.6μm and the interface defect rate is 16.5%.
第一句翻译得很好,无需修改。
3楼2013-04-06 11:21:21
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wxqtjw: 金币+1 2013-04-06 17:57:56
air plasma sprayed ??sprayed air plasma
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