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小兰花

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[求助] 润色一句话,材料类,中译英。谢谢!

本文分别A1方法和A2方法从两个尺度(微观尺度和纳观尺度)研究金属材料微结构的演变。
翻译:In this study A1 method and A2 method are adopted respectively to study of microstructure evolution in metal materials from two scales (microscale and nanoscale).

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8楼: Originally posted by hookhans at 2013-03-28 14:08:32
这样说, 怎么样?
1) In this work, the microstructure evolution in metal materials is studied by method A1 and method A2, which correspond to microscale and nanoscale, respectively.
2) In view of tw ...

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      本论文分别采用A1方法和A2方法从两个尺度(微观尺度和纳观尺度)研究金属材料微结构的演变。在微结构演变的A1方法研究方面,首先,....。其次,....。最后....。在微结构演变的A2方法研究方面,....
    In this work, the microstructure evolution in metal materials is studied by method A1 and method A2, which correspond to microscale and nanoscale, respectively. In the study on method A1 of microstructure evolution, firstly, .... Secondly, .... Finally,   .... In the study onmethod A2 of microstructure evolution, ....
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In this study, we investigate the evolution of metal material microstructure by the A1 method and the A2 method respectively in two scales (microscale and nanoscale).


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2楼: Originally posted by Rio2016 at 2013-03-28 09:48:22
In this study, we investigate the evolution of metal material microstructure by the A1 method and the A2 method respectively in two scales (microscale and nanoscale).


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谢谢帮忙,翻译的不错。
但刚才我忘记说明了,我希望采用被动语态翻译。
谢谢。
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小兰花: 金币+3, ★★★很有帮助, 感谢您的热心帮忙。 2013-03-28 14:31:04
In this study, the evolution of metal material microstructure is investigated by the A1 method and the A2 method respectively in two scales (microscale and nanoscale).

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