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Dear Dr. De-min:
                           
Peer review of your manuscript has been completed.  The Associate Editor, Dr. Mike Stenstrom, has accepted your manuscript for publication in Water Environment Research, pending your response to several minor review comments. For your use in preparing your revision, comments of the Associate Editor and Reviewers are given below.                     
                           
Reviewer #1: Authors have made changes to the manuscript however it still needs improvements in the following areas:

1. Paper still lacks in proper journal English language and authors need to thoroughly review the text and make improvements. As an example, please refer "respectively" instead of "separately" when discussing various parameters and their values in same sentences. In abstract - "advanced oxidation process for (instead of "to" treatment of...".

2. Please include chemical reactions to support discussions for effect of various parameters in the text.

3. Photographs are indicated in response letter but not incorporated in the manuscript, so please include them.
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