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chenry

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[求助] 审稿人给了审稿意见,全是手写的,龙飞凤舞,麻烦高手来指导一下

前一段时间投了一篇文章,就靠它毕业呢,还好三个审稿人都给了小修的意见,但第二个审稿人将审稿意见手写然后扫描上传,虽然很认真;但我看起来着实有些困难,希望坛子里的虫友们帮帮忙啦~真的很困难啊~

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chenry

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2楼: Originally posted by hhjubs at 2012-12-18 19:31:19
Image8 . not clear how this was measured, need to be explained.

谢谢~我正在逐一研究中,非常感谢
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hhjubs

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220chengeng: 金币+1, 感谢应助。 2012-12-19 16:29:24
Image8 . not clear how this was measured, need to be explained.

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weichin

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chenry: 金币+5, 翻译EPI+1, 还没看完,必须给你满分,牛人~ 2012-12-20 09:07:16
龙飞凤舞真是不假,以下供参考,加粗部分是不确定、待商榷的地方。你从专业的角度能猜个八九不离十。

Image1: Particles must have been measured at the outlet of fluidized bed, that is the actual inflow of particles to weight loss method gross own two points

Image2: Whereas even under steady state, the particle entrainment from a fluidized bed will change with time as of scars out of fine particles

Image3: How segregation of particles avoid at fluidized bed, it should be a continuous particle entrainor rather that fluidized bed to be in steady state.
Image4: Consider terms wettable or water loving (hydrophilic) and non-wettable (hydrophobic).

Image5: Please ch××× glass bead should be hydrophobic and ash should be hydrophic.

Image6: Need to indicate particle shapes, were they similar or different. Express by shape factor, pl. (please) consider.

Image7: Need to mention where was desiccant used as fly ash when dried is a great desiccant, small, l/h (or l/n)

Image8: Not clear how thin was measured, need to be explained.

Image9: How about particles, were they spherical?
That_that_is_is;_that_that_is_not_is_not.
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