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xinsonic

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[求助] 刚写好的套磁信,希望大家给予指点,

Dear Dr. xxx:

Thank you for your attention to my email. I am a postgraduate student in College of Geophysics and Information Engineering, China University of Xxx, P.R. China, and interested in the study of numerical simulation using hp-FEM, which matches your research about XXXX. I\\\\\\\'ve determined to study more of this, and I would like to know if there is a Ph.D. position available in your group.

I\\\\\\\'ve been doing research on numerical simulation of Xxxx  during my master period, especially in simulating the response of Xxxx and developing Xxxx . More details can be found in my CV attached to this email.

Would you mind taking a few minutes reading my file, please? I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you.

Sincerely,

XXX

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xinsonic

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18楼: Originally posted by myprayer at 2012-09-03 19:33:51
前面的写的不错,就是缺少点自己先关的信息,可以把自己的已经得到的研究成果给说一下参加过哪些课题,发表过什么好的论文都可以希望楼主可以成功

恩,谢谢,我再加点自己的东西
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648582818: 金币+1, Thanks for your answer 2012-09-02 20:40:36
648582818: 回帖置顶 2012-09-02 20:40:37
xinsonic: 金币+5, ★★★很有帮助 2012-12-13 18:37:57
挺不过的,lz如果有文章发表可以在第二段最后提一下你已发表几篇paper。只用提一下就行,还有你的英语成绩最好也一句话提一下。其它的都不错
2楼2012-09-02 19:14:15
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migi_liang

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648582818: 金币+1, Thanks for your answer 2012-09-03 21:13:17
不行吧。。。最好在邮件正文就写自己的研究经历,教授才懒得下载看你的文件。。。
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fjc0422: 金币+1, Dank u 2012-09-03 18:49:56
648582818: 回帖置顶 2012-09-03 21:13:22
xinsonic: 金币+5, ★★★很有帮助 2012-12-13 18:38:09
总体上很不错,就是这句话是败笔
More details can be found in my CV attached to this email. 是你的任务,让导师觉得你会对他有用,而不是他从你的CV中找出你可能对他有用的地方。
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