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xinsonic

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[求助] 刚写好的套磁信,希望大家给予指点,

Dear Dr. xxx:

Thank you for your attention to my email. I am a postgraduate student in College of Geophysics and Information Engineering, China University of Xxx, P.R. China, and interested in the study of numerical simulation using hp-FEM, which matches your research about XXXX. I\\\\\\\'ve determined to study more of this, and I would like to know if there is a Ph.D. position available in your group.

I\\\\\\\'ve been doing research on numerical simulation of Xxxx  during my master period, especially in simulating the response of Xxxx and developing Xxxx . More details can be found in my CV attached to this email.

Would you mind taking a few minutes reading my file, please? I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you.

Sincerely,

XXX

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648582818: 金币+1, Thanks for your answer 2012-09-02 20:40:36
648582818: 回帖置顶 2012-09-02 20:40:37
xinsonic: 金币+5, ★★★很有帮助 2012-12-13 18:37:57
挺不过的,lz如果有文章发表可以在第二段最后提一下你已发表几篇paper。只用提一下就行,还有你的英语成绩最好也一句话提一下。其它的都不错
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fjc0422: 金币+1, Dank u 2012-09-03 18:49:56
648582818: 回帖置顶 2012-09-03 21:13:22
xinsonic: 金币+5, ★★★很有帮助 2012-12-13 18:38:09
总体上很不错,就是这句话是败笔
More details can be found in my CV attached to this email. 是你的任务,让导师觉得你会对他有用,而不是他从你的CV中找出你可能对他有用的地方。
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xinsonic

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648582818: 回帖置顶 2012-09-03 21:14:28
非常感谢各位虫友的指点,作了点修改,望指正...

Dear Dr. xxx:

I am a postgraduate student in College of Geophysics and Information Engineering, China University of Petroleum (Beijing), P.R. China, and interested in the study of numerical simulation using hp-FEM. I've determined to study more of this, and I would like to know if there is a Ph.D. position available in your group.

I've been doing research on numerical simulation of resistivity Logging-While-Drilling using highly accurate and self-adaptive hp-FEM during my master’s degree period, especially in simulating the response of resistivity LWD tool and developing optimal mesh refinement strategy. I’ve read your paper, “XXX”. And I was so fascinated by your result that xxx, which gives some guidance for what I am doing now. My CV has been attached to this email.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you.

Sincerely,

XXX
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wine0431: 回帖置顶 2012-09-20 14:09:28
wine0431: 金币+3, 感谢热心回答与建议 2012-09-20 14:09:42
忌讳没有老师给你要CV的时候发CV过去,申请套磁信可以简要介绍自己,然后字数控制在200字左右就可以了
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xinsonic

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16楼: Originally posted by xiaopin_88 at 2012-09-03 16:58:02
lz, 请问graduate admission essay是网页吗?还是书?能不能麻烦lz详细介绍一下,非常感谢

直接google就出来了,是网页,上面详细讲解了Graduate Admissions Essay的方方面面,讲的不错,推荐看一下,我们还是感谢9楼吧
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648582818: 金币+1, Thanks for your answer 2012-09-03 21:13:17
不行吧。。。最好在邮件正文就写自己的研究经历,教授才懒得下载看你的文件。。。
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648582818: 金币+1, Thanks for your answer 2012-09-03 21:13:44
可以在第二段简要写上对导师哪部分比较感兴趣,自己的研究与导师研究方向的关系。这样可以让导师知道你这封信是针对他写的,而不是群发的。
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fjc0422: 金币+1, Dank u 2012-09-03 18:50:06
xinsonic: 金币+5, ★★★很有帮助 2012-12-13 18:38:35
Would you mind taking a few minutes reading my file, please?这句话删了,教授喜欢看就看,这你做不了主。然后的话最好加上你看到了教授的哪篇文献,稍微说一下感想
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fjc0422: 金币+1, thx for your information 2012-09-03 18:50:17
xinsonic: 金币+5 2012-12-13 18:38:42
第一句也可以删了,总感觉不native ,建议可以看看graduate admission essay ,上面有地道的,可以借鉴下
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xinsonic

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2楼: Originally posted by garrisongao at 2012-09-02 19:14:15
挺不过的,lz如果有文章发表可以在第二段最后提一下你已发表几篇paper。只用提一下就行,还有你的英语成绩最好也一句话提一下。其它的都不错

谢谢啊,文章暂时还没有一作的,英语成绩还没出,
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