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89333627

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[交流] who could help me check this paragraph out.

I have writen a cover letter for searching a job. the next paragraph is the middle part of the cover letter.  I would appreciate it very much if someone could help me to check it out.
  
          My experience and enthusiasm makes me an excellent candidate for the position you are seeking to fill. My 5 years experiences in our institute allowed me to develop several professional skills, such as composites molding technology, 3D weaving technology and mechanical property testing. And I skilled in using the software of ANSYS, CATIA, LabVIEW, AutoCAD, ect. I also have the knowledge of automatic control, for I have made an automatic molding machine used to produce composite z-pins. The machine has been applied for a patent. In addition, I have leaded other 4 students to participate the 3rd SAMPE China super lightweight composite wing contest sponsored by Boeing Co.. We achieved very good results in each of the item in the contest. We got the 1st prize for the appearance quality, the 2nd for the mechanical property and 1st for the poster.
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89333627: 金币+1 2012-08-30 21:41:31
I think your describe is very good, wish someone can help you!
Good luck!
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89333627: 金币+1 2012-08-30 21:40:56
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89333627: 金币+1 2012-08-30 21:41:39
I think you are great
and I can't find any mistake because of my poor Englishsorry
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