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meimeichen

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The present study found that the IMF content of Laiwu Black pigs continuously
increased when their BW increased from 50 kg to 90 kg and it also significantly increased in Lulai Black pigs when their BW increased from 70 kg to 90 kg (P<0.05)
用了4个increase，如何修改保持意思不变呢？
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meimeichen: 金币+1, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★很有帮助 2012-09-24 22:40:07
修改如下：
The present study found that the IMF content of Laiwu Black pigs continuously increased when they have an increase in BW from 50 kg to 90 kg and it also significantly increased in Lulai Black pigs with their BW changing from 70 kg to 90 kg (P<0.05)

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meimeichen: 金币+9, ★★★很有帮助, 1 2012-09-24 22:40:19
The present study found that the IMF content of Laiwu Black pigs increased continuously with their BW from 50 kg to 90 kg and it also increased significantly with their BW from 70 kg to 90 kg in Lulai Black pigs (P<0.05).

分成两句或许读起来顺些
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mlanqiang

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The present study found that the IMF content of Laiwu Black pigs continuously
increased when their BW went up from 50 kg to 90 kg, while it also significantly increased in Lulai Black pigs when their BW rised from 70 kg to 90 kg (P<0.05)
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chelinran

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The present study found that the IMF content of Laiwu Black pigs continuously
increased when their BW changed from 50 kg to 90 kg and it also significantly increased in Lulai Black pigs when their BW changed from 70 kg to 90 kg (P<0.05)
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5楼2012-08-23 23:27:58
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以译代劳翻译

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可以改为对称句型，it 建议换为that：
The present study found that the IMF content of Laiwu Black pigs continuously increased when their BW rose from 50 kg to 90 kg, and that of Lulai Black pigs significantly increased when their BW rose from 70 kg to 90 kg (P<0.05)
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知识都学杂了

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The present study discovered that the IMF content of Laiwu Black pigs continuously increased with their BW increasing from 50Kg to 90Kg, likewise it also had a significant increase as BW rose from 70Kg to 90Kg.
把increase换词性用，然后，其他词尽量用S，压s韵
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123_happy

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The present study found that the relationship between the IMF content and the BW is positive. The typical examples are Laiwu Black pigs and Lulai Black pigs.  The IMF content increased when the BW from 50 kg to 90 kg for  Laiwu Black pigs,  and when the BW is from 70 kg to 90 kg  for Lulai Black pigs (P<0.05).
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nanbingyue

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The present study found that the IMF content of Laiwu Black pigs continuously incresaed when their BW increased from 50 kg to 90 kg,  
and there is  also a significant increase in Lulai Black pigs when their BW increased from 70 kg to 90 kg (P<0.05)
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