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meimeichen

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The present study found that the IMF content of Laiwu Black pigs continuously
increased when their BW increased from 50 kg to 90 kg and it also significantly increased in Lulai Black pigs when their BW increased from 70 kg to 90 kg (P<0.05)
用了4个increase，如何修改保持意思不变呢？
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以译代劳翻译

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可以改为对称句型，it 建议换为that：
The present study found that the IMF content of Laiwu Black pigs continuously increased when their BW rose from 50 kg to 90 kg, and that of Lulai Black pigs significantly increased when their BW rose from 70 kg to 90 kg (P<0.05)
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Carey117

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sltmac: 金币+1 2012-08-15 19:45:59
meimeichen: 金币+1, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★很有帮助 2012-09-24 22:40:07
修改如下：
The present study found that the IMF content of Laiwu Black pigs continuously increased when they have an increase in BW from 50 kg to 90 kg and it also significantly increased in Lulai Black pigs with their BW changing from 70 kg to 90 kg (P<0.05)

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meimeichen: 金币+9, ★★★很有帮助, 1 2012-09-24 22:40:19
The present study found that the IMF content of Laiwu Black pigs increased continuously with their BW from 50 kg to 90 kg and it also increased significantly with their BW from 70 kg to 90 kg in Lulai Black pigs (P<0.05).

分成两句或许读起来顺些
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The present study found that the IMF content of Laiwu Black pigs continuously
increased when their BW went up from 50 kg to 90 kg, while it also significantly increased in Lulai Black pigs when their BW rised from 70 kg to 90 kg (P<0.05)
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