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[求助] 请高手帮忙修改几个英文句子,多谢了!!

请帮忙修改几个英文句子,编辑说这几个句子有问题,多谢了!!
1 When  the  Mg ions  concentration  reachs  to  6 mol%,  the concentration have exceeded the threshold value of In ions.
2 It can be summarized from the previous works that the violet shift of the absorption edge is attributed to the increasing in the ability of adjacent dopant ions to polarize an O2- ion shortens the band gap of the valence electron transition.
3 The  results  in  regard with  exposure  energy  of  In: Ce: Mn:  LiNbO3 crystals  are  shown in Table 1.
4 From  Table  1 we  can  see  that  the  exposure  energy  of crystals  is significantly  improved with  the increase concentration of Mg2+
5 It  is  proved  that introducing M
g into crystalbrings the noticeable improvement for suppressing the light-induced scattering to practice
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把你要表达的意思用中文准确的写出来,你的英文确实不知所云啊
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jiayou201101: 金币+40, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案 2012-06-16 20:42:57
1 When  the  Mg ions  concentration  reachs  to  6 mol%,  the concentration have exceeded the threshold value of In ions.
When the concentration of the Mg ion reaches 6% in molar ration, it will exceed the threshold of the In ion.
2 It can be summarized from the previous works that the violet shift of the absorption edge is attributed to the increasing in the ability of adjacent dopant ions to polarize an O2- ion shortens the band gap of the valence electron transition.
It can be concluded from previous work that the blue shift of the absorption peak is attributed to an increase in the polarity of the adjacent dopant ions on the oxygen ions which can shorten the band gap of the valence electron transition.
3 The  results  in  regard with  exposure  energy  of  In: Ce: Mn:  LiNbO3 crystals  are  shown in Table 1.
要表达什么?in regard with表达有误,with regard to or with respect to
4 From  Table  1 we  can  see  that  the  exposure  energy  of crystals  is significantly  improved with  the increase concentration of Mg2+
As can be seen in Table 1, the exposure energy of crystals is greatly improved with the increasing of the concentration of magnesium ions.
5 It  is  proved  that introducing Mg into crystal brings the noticeable improvement for suppressing the light-induced scattering to practice
It’s proved that the doping of magnesium into the crystals can greatly reduce the light-induced scattering.
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