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The results show that the slurry with a solid content as high as 50vol.% has better fluidity and densification can be obtained by mixing two type of  powders with mass ratio of fine particles to coarse as 5:5,  the viscosity of  the slurry is less than 1Pa•s. 这句有语法错误吗。要怎么表达。THANKS.......

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ailing2023: 金币+2, thanks for your help 2012-06-08 21:38:06
“The results show that the slurry with a solid content as high as 50vol.% has better fluidity and densification can be obtained by mixing two type of  powders with mass ratio of fine particles to coarse as 5:5,  the viscosity of  the slurry is less than 1Pa•s. "

为了更明白表达我的意思,我用汉语回复。
(1)如果用”has better fluidity ”因为是比较级后面最好跟“than ....."或用“has a good fluidity";
(2)"densification can be obtained by mixing two type of  powders with mass ratio of fine particles to coarse as 5:5,  the viscosity of  the slurry is less than 1Pa•s. "意思不一致,而且觉得用densification不合适。你是不是想表达:“更致密的浆液可以通过两种粗、细粉末按质量比为5:5混合得到.”?如果是这意思,densification应该改为a densified slurry. additionally, "mass ratio of fine particles to coarse" should be changed as "mass ratio of the fine particles to the coarse". 为了一致,后面的less than 应该为more than,当然用more than的话,1Pa.S也需要换成合适的数值。

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6楼: Originally posted by holypapa at 2012-06-08 18:55:19
“The results show that the slurry with a solid content as high as 50vol.% has better fluidity and densification can be obtained by mixing two type of  powders with mass ratio of fine particles to co ...

谢谢。我想改为The results show that the slurry with a solid content as high as 50vol.% can be obtained by mixing two types of  powders with mass ratio of fine particles to coarse as 5:5, which has better fluidity and densification.  The viscosity of  the slurry is less than 1Pa•s.           这样何如?

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