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chenweigang

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[求助] 小虫最近要投一个期刊,请教大虫们看下我这个投稿信

Dear Editors:
        We submit our manuscript entitled “The Design of HGB Measurement System Based on C8051F020” to Journal of Computational Information Systems for publication. We have proposed a novel HGB measurement system with close-loop controlling which is important to improve stability and accuracy of HGB measurement. Furthermore, the system can be transplanted to the blood analyzer and made portable HGB measurement. All authors have seen the manuscript and approved to submit to your journal. Thank you very much for your attention and consideration. If there are any questions please contact with me.
Authors: xxxxxxxx
Tel: xxxxxxx
Corresponding author:xxxxxx
Yours sincerely
xxxxxx.
May, 31, 2012


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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
最好再提一下本文没有在其它地方发表或投稿。
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chenweigang

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2楼: Originally posted by nono2009 at 2012-05-31 19:04:31
最好再提一下本文没有在其它地方发表或投稿。

有地道点的英语吗   关于有没有去其他地方投稿的英语
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3楼2012-05-31 19:42:04
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chenweigang

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2楼: Originally posted by nono2009 at 2012-05-31 19:04:31
最好再提一下本文没有在其它地方发表或投稿。

Dear Editors:
        We submit our manuscript entitled “The Design of HGB Measurement System Based on C8051F020” to Journal of Computational Information Systems for publication. We have proposed a novel HGB measurement system with close-loop controlling which is important to improve stability and accuracy of HGB measurement. Furthermore, the system can be transplanted to the blood analyzer and made portable HGB measurement. The work described has not been submitted elsewhere for publication. All authors have seen the manuscript and approved to submit to your journal. Thank you very much for your attention and consideration. If there are any questions please contact with me.
这样行吗  加了 导数第4行 the 开始的句子
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4楼2012-05-31 19:52:47
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rensu

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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
It is always better to use the editor's title and name (if you know).

The cover letter should address what has been done in your paper, the highlights, and the perspective readership. It will also help the editor a lot to find proper reviewers. It is not enough just say one sentences. The english should be improved.

If the journal requires suggested reviews, it also should be addressed in the end of the cover letter.
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4楼: Originally posted by chenweigang at 2012-05-31 19:52:47
Dear Editors:
        We submit our manuscript entitled “The Design of HGB Measurement System Based on C8051F020” to Journal of Computational Information Systems for publication. We have proposed ...

可以
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chenweigang

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5楼: Originally posted by rensu at 2012-05-31 19:54:13
It is always better to use the editor's title and name (if you know).

The cover letter should address what has been done in your paper, the highlights, and the perspective readership. It will also ...

? 整点中文呗 小弟英语比较差
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7楼2012-05-31 20:34:34
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chenweigang

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6楼: Originally posted by nono2009 at 2012-05-31 19:58:56
可以...

多谢
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rensu

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7楼: Originally posted by chenweigang at 2012-05-31 20:34:34
? 整点中文呗 小弟英语比较差...

Then try to improve it.

I'm using my office computer and only type english.
9楼2012-05-31 20:37:10
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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
写得差不多了,可以投了
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