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1 在修改稿9页的底部和10页的顶部,我们分别详细讨论了金纳米粒子的实验熔化温度,比较了我们的模型,Lee et al的模型和实验结果。
The experimental melting temperature for Au particles  and a comparison among our model, Lee et al.’s model and the experimental results have been discussed and made in detail, respectively, at the bottom of the page 9 and top of the page 10 in the revised manuscript.
2 原稿中的语句“...‘已经被删除。
The statements in the original manuscript that “... ” has also been deleted.

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wenhualuo: 金币+6, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★很有帮助 2012-05-07 20:22:44
总感觉这两个句子翻译顺序有些乱,做些小小改正,lz可以比较一下:
1.At the bottom of the page 9 and top of the page 10 in the revised manuscript,the experimental melting temperature of Au particles  and a comparison among our model, Lee et al.’s model and the experimental results have been respectively discussed in detail.
2.In the original manuscript,the statements  “... ” has also been deleted.
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2楼: Originally posted by jffree at 2012-05-07 20:03:53:
总感觉这两个句子翻译顺序有些乱,做些小小改正,lz可以比较一下:
1.At the bottom of the page 9 and top of the page 10 in the revised manuscript,the experimental melting temperature of Au particles   ...

“... ”是一句话,前面要不要加"that"?
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3楼: Originally posted by wenhualuo at 2012-05-07 20:10:36:
“... ”是一句话,前面要不要加"that"?

个人感觉不必加that。
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