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Key Reader (Referencing comments):

The references are up-to-date and appropriate.

Key Reader (Points In Favor):

The paper is well written and represents an solid mathematical analysis of the processs. New insight into the physical process is gained including ---

Key Reader (Points Detracting):

The modeling and mathematical analysis is not verified or validated using actual process data. Question: How are is the reader to know if the analytic model reflects the results achieved in practice? This point needs to be addressed by the authors.

Key Reader (Importance of Contribution):

As mentioned above, the modeling provides new insight into the physical process.


Reviewer #1 (Referencing comments):

The references are up-to-date and appropriate.

Reviewer #1 (Points In Favor):

The paper presents an excellent mathematical analysis of ---. It is useful that --- were included in the analysis.

Reviewer #1 (Points Detracting):

The paper is generally well written but there are some corrections in grammar which should be made before the paper is accepted for publication.

Reviewer #1 (Importance of Contribution):

This work gives a good presentation of the mathematical models needed to describe ---.


Reviewer #2 (Referencing comments):

The references are mostly up-to-date and appropriate.

Reviewer #2 (Points In Favor):

This paper is well written with a clearly logic approach.
This paper covers all parametric studies.

Reviewer #2 (Points Detracting):

Although it presented all essential prediction with respect to each parameter, this paper needs to show preliminary experimental data to verify their model.


Reviewer #2 (Importance of Contribution):

The main contribution of this paper would be the determination of optimum parameters to obtain desired shapes/geometries with best material properties.

Reviewer #2 (Remarks to the Author):

This paper is accptable with minor changes - to show an example of the comparison between prediction and experiments.

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