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hichancekill

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[交流] 麻烦大牛看一下我这个major revision该任何修改?

投到finite elements in analysis and design. 快四个月了终于有了审稿意见,是major revision. 审稿人的意见只附了一个,是关于文章创新点的问题(推测其他审稿人的意见是接受,所以就没附上?)。

The review of your paper has been completed, and the comments of the reviewers are given below. In particular, the review given is unable to ascertain the novelty contained in the approach described in the paper. For the paper to be acceptable, this point must be satisfactorily addressed--if you are to to resubmit the paper, it should be extensively edited to clearly highlight the innovations in analysis technique featured in the work.
Accordingly, a thorough revision of this paper is needed, after which I will re-evaluate it for publication, possibly in consultation once more with the reviewers.
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Reviewer #1: The authors attempt to model concrete at meso scale and try to mesh aggregate, mortar,  and ITZ. WHile they have succeeded they seem to have used various tools as black boxes and furnish no details of the algorithms in these tools. The tools themselves are not theirs. So it is difficult to acertain their contribution and the associated novelty. Extensive revision needed.
关于这一点我的解释:混凝土细观上由aggregate\mortar和itz组成。现在研究者都能mesh aggregate 和mortar, 但是没有人能 mesh ITZ,而ITZ又是非常重要的。我的文章的创新之处在于在利用现有的有限元建模软件mesh aggregate 和mortar的基础上, 利用自编的程序成功mesh了ITZ。 不过在文章里对自编的程序只进行了原理的介绍和实例说明,没有附上具体的代码。

不知道大牛们有什么具体的建议没有?在哪些方面进行 thorough revision?
谢谢各位!
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楼: Originally posted by nono2009 at 2012-03-13 19:56:26:
从中午解释来看,你的论文的创新性是够的,关键还是论文的英文表述上要非常明确地表达你的创新,在原理介绍上可以更详细一些

有道理,谢谢建议
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hichancekill(金币+5): 谢谢参与
你编的部分程序要加上参考文献,应该不是你完全自创的算法吧?
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楼: Originally posted by xkool at 2012-03-13 19:46:21:
你编的部分程序要加上参考文献,应该不是你完全自创的算法吧?

确实是我为解决itz的网格划分提出来的一个算法,没有参考文献
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hichancekill(金币+5): 谢谢参与
从中文解释来看,你的论文的创新性是够的,关键还是论文的英文表述上要非常明确地表达你的创新,在原理介绍上可以更详细一些

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