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Today is Saturday .I felt very happy because the weather is sunny!yeah!
I got up at nearly 8:00 and then I went to the library. On the weeks, there are too many classes .so I really cherish the weekend time that controlled by myself. I could do what I want to do. Firstly I complete a paper for my second TEM4 test. please do not laugh at me, I hadn’t past the TEM4 at the first time for I only got 56 .Next time I promise myself to get over 60 grades, just fighting !
Umm…maybe we can skim the period that how I threaded my way in the crowd and struggled for my meal in the dining hall.
And the afternoon, I went the bathroom to have a shower. I felt very comfortable. I looked my own face in the mirror and suddenly found that I am also a pretty girl ….he he….. it has been said that a person’s appearance in the mirror is more beautiful than what it is ….
At the night, I still went to the library and did some work of remembering the vocabulary. I was satisfied with my fest …
So I decided to go back at 9:00 pm..
Ps: any mistakes, you can point me out .and let us to get progress together!
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ailing2023(金币+3): thank you for your careful appraise, it is very helpful 2012-03-11 09:36:02
【i thought there were some errors in your writing,i have recomposed some parts 。tomorrow i will going to recompose your essay】
Today is Saturday .I feel very happy because the weather is sunny!yeah!
so I really cherish the weekend time which is controlled by myself.
Firstly I  have completed a paper for my second TEM4 test.(已经完成,用have done表示主动,如果是表被动就是:the second tem4 test have been completed)
I hadn’t past the TEM4 at the first time and what was worse that I only got 56。
I promise that i will  get over 60 grades in next time, just fighting !
非吾小天下,才高而已;非吾纵古今,时赋而已;非吾睨九州,宏观而已;三非焉罪?无梦至胜
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谁还可以来帮改
非吾小天下,才高而已;非吾纵古今,时赋而已;非吾睨九州,宏观而已;三非焉罪?无梦至胜
4楼2012-03-11 16:27:33
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: Originally posted by 古可ぷ at 2012-03-11 16:27:33:
谁还可以来帮改

原来 原来 是可以用汉字的啊 有个疑问 你哪里来的表情。。。。
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