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Today is Saturday .I felt very happy because the weather is sunny!yeah!
I got up at nearly 8:00 and then I went to the library. On the weeks, there are too many classes .so I really cherish the weekend time that controlled by myself. I could do what I want to do. Firstly I complete a paper for my second TEM4 test. please do not laugh at me, I hadn¡¯t past the TEM4 at the first time for I only got 56 .Next time I promise myself to get over 60 grades, just fighting !
Umm¡­maybe we can skim the period that how I threaded my way in the crowd and struggled for my meal in the dining hall.
And the afternoon, I went the bathroom to have a shower. I felt very comfortable. I looked my own face in the mirror and suddenly found that I am also a pretty girl ¡­.he he¡­.. it has been said that a person¡¯s appearance in the mirror is more beautiful than what it is ¡­.
At the night, I still went to the library and did some work of remembering the vocabulary. I was satisfied with my fest ¡­
So I decided to go back at 9:00 pm..
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