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3.11 Today is Saturday .I felt very happy because the weather is sunny!yeah! I got up at nearly 8:00 and then I went to the library. On the weeks, there are too many classes .so I really cherish the weekend time that controlled by myself. I could do what I want to do. Firstly I complete a paper for my second TEM4 test. please do not laugh at me, I hadn’t past the TEM4 at the first time for I only got 56 .Next time I promise myself to get over 60 grades, just fighting ! Umm…maybe we can skim the period that how I threaded my way in the crowd and struggled for my meal in the dining hall. And the afternoon, I went the bathroom to have a shower. I felt very comfortable. I looked my own face in the mirror and suddenly found that I am also a pretty girl ….he he….. it has been said that a person’s appearance in the mirror is more beautiful than what it is …. At the night, I still went to the library and did some work of remembering the vocabulary. I was satisfied with my fest … So I decided to go back at 9:00 pm.. Ps: any mistakes, you can point me out .and let us to get progress together! |
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小木虫(金币+0.5):给个红包，谢谢回帖
ailing2023(金币+3): thank you for your careful appraise, it is very helpful 2012-03-11 09:36:02
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ailing2023(金币+3): thank you for your careful appraise, it is very helpful 2012-03-11 09:36:02
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【i thought there were some errors in your writing，i have recomposed some parts 。tomorrow i will going to recompose your essay】 Today is Saturday .I feel very happy because the weather is sunny!yeah! so I really cherish the weekend time which is controlled by myself. Firstly I have completed a paper for my second TEM4 test.（已经完成，用have done表示主动，如果是表被动就是：the second tem4 test have been completed） I hadn’t past the TEM4 at the first time and what was worse that I only got 56。 I promise that i will get over 60 grades in next time, just fighting ! |
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