请各位大侠帮我看看这个修改意见：关于钛合金冷变形的。
Reviewer #2: This is a well written paper that describes the influence of cold rolling on the deformation response of a Ti alloy. The experimenta are well described and the accompanying analysis of texture and dislocation dynamics is well thought out and easy to follow. The change in deformation mechanism is intriguing but can the author comments on the formation of loops? Also what is the oxygen content and are there impurities that can affect strengthening, particularly at grain boundaries? Is there an influence off grain size?
我文章中没有提到loops，在钛合金TEM照片中也很少看到loops啊，我不太明白他的意思。而且我的文章就是讨论合金经过不同冷轧程度的组织演变和强化机理，冷轧之前的所有工艺都是相同的，就是冷轧的时候压下量不一样，难道冷轧的时候多轧了几个道次氧含量就会发生很大的变化吗？很困惑，不是很明白审稿人的意思。求高人指点。或者推荐参考文献也可以。非常感谢！！！
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