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Reviewers' comments on your paper referenced above have now been received.  You will see that they advise against publication of your work.  Therefore, I'm afraid I must reject your submission for publication in Journal of Power Sources.

For your guidance, please find attached the reviewers' comments.
Reviewer #1: The manuscript provides data on the effect of Ti additives on the structural and electrochemical characterization of LiFePO4. The results are interesting, but some points have to be clarified before proceeding to publication:
A representative XRD Rietveld  analysis pattern should be added.
Data on the mean crystallite size (from XRD) and mean particle diameter (from SEM) of the olivine-phase for pure and Ti-containing samples should be provided.  
Reviewer #2: This paper reports the effect of Ti incorporation into LiFePO4. This paper seems well written, but this reviewer cannot find sufficient novelty in this paper. Since so much work has been done on metal-doped LiFePO4, the merit of titanium incorporation cannot be understood. Unless the authors focus the merit of the titanium incorporation by considering the literature, this paper should not be accepted.

Other concerns:
1) Rate capability can be controlled by the electrode thickness and active mass. Therefore, the rate performance is not meaningful.
2) The performance in this paper does not exceed those in literature.

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