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Surely, you did a very good job. i do not think there are many errors in the letter. But i think it is also a good chance for me to practice my english. So I rewrite it again and hope it would be useful. Any comments and opinions are very welcome. the following is my rewritted letter.
Dear Jon,
May I call you like that? This is Daisy. I'm glad to have this opportunity to study English with you. Honestly, I'm feeling a litter nervous at the beginning. Before starting the class I doubted that whether I could do well in the class. But when I was having the class, I found that the atmosphere was fine. The class was full of Laughing and funny stuff, surely also, of the pictures. I'm feeling very well. It's the first time since I began studying English that I have a strong feeling I want to speak out of loud in English. It's pretty good.
Well, in fact, I'm little curious about you and your family.Definitely I am not that kind of person who is curious for the other's privacy .I just want to know you more. I want to konw the way you are living, the style you are doing the works, and the education your children are having. As you said in the class, you worked very hard so that you wife could stay at home to run a home-schooling business at first. Then, you two changed your charges, your wife worked and you stayed at home for home-schooling. But now, both you and your wife are working. And by the way,what is the home-shooling? how is your home-schooling going on? Tell me something more about your home-schooling,ok? Do You just teach your students the book knowledge or other kinds of practical knowledges or living skills？
Thank you for your time and I'm looking forward to the next class.
Yours sincerely,
Daisy
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