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The following is a E-mail I want to send  to my English teacher, Jon. So  I hope you can help me to find out the errors and put them right. Thank you!!

Jon,
     May I call you like this? This is Daisy, yeah, that Daisy.  I'm glad to go on to study English with you. Well,to be honest, I'm a litter nervous at the beginning. Before the class I doubted that whether I could do well in the class. But when it began, the atmosphere was fine. Laughing, funny, also the pictures. I'm feeling very well. It's the first time that I strongly want to speak out in English since I began studying English. It's pretty good.
     Well, in fact, I'm very curious about your family, the way you live, the style you doing things, and the education your children get . As you said in the class, you worked very hard so that you wife could stay at home to go on home-schooling at first. Then, you two changed, your wife worked and you stay at home for home-schooling. But now, both you and your wife work. Then, how is your home-schooling going on? What about your home-schooling? And what is the home-shooling? You just teach them the book knowledge or other kinds of knowledges and skills£¿
        Thank you for your reading and I'm looking forward to having the next class.      
                                                                                   Yours sincerely,
                                                                                           Daisy
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as a casual letter, u make it good to read, though it has many problems in it when it is a formal one.
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5Â¥: Originally posted by fjtony163 at 2011-12-01 04:17:38:
as a casual letter, u make it good to read, though it has many problems in it when it is a formal one.

Thank you!
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7Â¥: Originally posted by ljason at 2011-12-04 20:28:54:

Is there anything wrong?
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I'm a litter nervous at the beginning
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9Â¥: Originally posted by rogueliu at 2011-12-05 09:56:39:
I'm a litter nervous at the beginning

It should be "little". Thank you!
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