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The following is a E-mail I want to send  to my English teacher, Jon. So  I hope you can help me to find out the errors and put them right. Thank you!!

Jon,
   May I call you like this? This is Daisy, yeah, that Daisy.  I'm glad to go on to study English with you. Well,to be honest, I'm a litter nervous at the beginning. Before the class I doubted that whether I could do well in the class. But when it began, the atmosphere was fine. Laughing, funny, also the pictures. I'm feeling very well. It's the first time that I strongly want to speak out in English since I began studying English. It's pretty good.
   Well, in fact, I'm very curious about your family, the way you live, the style you doing things, and the education your children get . As you said in the class, you worked very hard so that you wife could stay at home to go on home-schooling at first. Then, you two changed, your wife worked and you stay at home for home-schooling. But now, both you and your wife work. Then, how is your home-schooling going on? What about your home-schooling? And what is the home-shooling? You just teach them the book knowledge or other kinds of knowledges and skills？
Thank you for your reading and I'm looking forward to having the next class.
                                                                           Yours sincerely,
                                                                                    Daisy

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as a casual letter, u make it good to read, though it has many problems in it when it is a formal one.

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5楼: Originally posted by fjtony163 at 2011-12-01 04:17:38:
as a casual letter, u make it good to read, though it has many problems in it when it is a formal one.

Thank you!