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As you will notice both the reviewers are rather concerned with the quality of your paper. Although they recognise the useful content in terms of the data provided, they point out that you are not giving any explanation of the mechanisms occurring in the mine. Probably some (back)analysis of the toppling mechanism would add value to the contribution.

My recommendation, if you are not providing such an explanation, is that you shorten the paper significantly and focus on monitoring and the results, and resubmit is as a technical note. Please follow the guidelines for submission of technical notes (no abstract, limited number of pages, limited number of figures, etc.).
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Reviewer #1: The project definitely is interesting, and the observation results for sure are valuable. What I am missing is a real technical approach to the explanation of the mechanisms occurring in the mine. Probably some (back)analysis of the toppling mechanism would add value to the contribution.
The paper is quite long for the contents it offers.
I would recommend to shorten it significantly and focus on monitoring and the results and resubmit is as a technical note.
Some comments and corrections have been inserted in the document.
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Reviewer #2: The manuscript could be of interest for the Journal but requires major changes that will improve the quality and the organization of the paper. A major revision of the English language is needed. An annotated PDF with punctual technical and major language corrections is attached.
Below are given some main recommendations that I suggest, in addition to comments put directly in the PDF document.
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