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中文大体上意思:CC4处理后ALT, AST and ALP and ALB 都变化,而TPs显著改善了这一变化,说明TPs具有保肝效果,与前人的研究结果(从其他植物中提取的同类药物)一致。
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要翻译成的英文:After CCl4 injection, the serum ALT, AST and ALP of the rats were significantly elevated and ALB dropped while simultaneous TPs treatment remarkably decreased the levels of the serum ALT, AST and ALP and increased ALB (Figure 3), indicating hepatoprotective effect of TPs, in accordant with the effect of polyprenols from other plants which provide evidence for the alternative material resources of polyprenols.
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sltmac(金币+1): 谢谢交流~ 2011-10-06 08:29:07
古可ぷ(金币+5): 第一句也不怎么贴切,后边的This phenomenon 开头这么陈述不怎么好,谢谢应助,没有中文原文,直接写成英文的 2011-10-06 09:26:44
The rat’s serum ALT, AST and ALP increased significantly after the injection of CCl4 .When they applied with TPs treatment ,it was found that the serum ALT, AST and ALP levels dropped remarkably while ALB increased (Figure 3), indicating TPs’s  hepatoprotective effect. This phenomenon showed accordance with former study of polyprenols derived from other plants, and provided an alternative material resource of polyprenols.

第一我不明白你的EPI那么高?
第二你怎么不把原文给我,害得我多翻译一次,

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2楼2011-10-06 00:38:48
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sltmac(金币+1): 欢迎常来~ 2011-10-06 08:29:16
古可ぷ(金币+10, 翻译EPI+1): 不错,后边的用被动语态陈述比较就perfect了 2011-10-06 09:22:53
After processed by CCl4, the contents of ALT, AST, and ALP in the rats serum increased significantly while contents of ALB decreased. On the other hand, TPs treatment remarkably reduced the level of ALT, AST, and ALP in serum and increased the level of ALB (Figure 3). The comparison above indicates the hepatoprotective effect of TPs, which matches the effect of polypernols from other plants providing evidence for alternative materical resource of polypernols.
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This phenomenon showed accordance with former study of polyprenols derived from other plants, providing an alternative material resource of polyprenols.
更正一下,,
4楼2011-10-06 00:55:02
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4楼: Originally posted by xiaokaizi at 2011-10-06 00:55:02:
This phenomenon showed accordance with former study of polyprenols derived from other plants, providing an alternative material resource of polyprenols.
更正一下,,

嘿嘿,这不是我翻译的,epi跟这没无关吧,这是专业描述,没有接触过,答案是有的,就是看看大家的和自己的怎么样
谢谢应助
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