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We also tried to do SAED, but it is not succeeded because the carbon core is too large to do SAED.
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SAED analysis was attempted but successful because the carbon core is too large

- Don't write "We"   Scientific work is not subjective
- Don't write "do ___"   Scientists might talk like that casually in the lab, but scientific writing should be more formal
- Don't just write  "SAED"  and assume the reader knows exactly what that means  Instead write "S__ A__ E__ D__  (SAED) analysis..."

- Would the carbon core be smaller - just the right size for SAED" - if the specimen had been prepared more carefully ??  I was careful to not include the word  "specimen"  in the above sentence, but someone already experienced in SAED might notice
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succeeded---successful
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6楼: Originally posted by yuhaili-11 at 2011-08-17 16:58:37:

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We also tried to do SAED, but it failedl because the carbon core was too large to do SAED.
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We also tried to do SAED, but it failed because the carbon core is too large to be done SAED.
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It was characterized by SAED,but we failed,maybe the size of the carbon core is too big to do.
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but it was not successful,

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8楼: Originally posted by phu_grassman at 2011-08-17 17:06:18
We also tried to do SAED, but it failedl because the carbon core was too large to do SAED.

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  Note what I wrote about sample or specimen preparation

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  IMHO, "failed" is too general a term
  "SAED results were unattainable"  is short and sweet, but may not escape careful scrutiny of someone experienced in SAED
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..., but we didn't succeed because the carbon core was ....
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..., but we failed because the carbon core was ...
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what is mean sead?

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