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happymusic

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[求助] 一个假设的翻译,求帮忙润色

Assumption. If the difference between the score,evaluated by a user, of a knowledge point and the weighted average score of it exceeds a certain range of the confidence interval, we consider the user’s evaluation is unreasonable and his domain weight should be reduced by punishment according  to that difference.
我想表达意思是:
假设:如果一个用户给一个知识点的分值,与这个知识点所得到的加权平均分值,的差异超过了一定的置信区间,我们就认为这个用户对此知识点的评价不合理,他的领域权重就应该依照其差异程度惩罚而减小.

感觉我的英文写的不够清晰,特别是其中it的指代问题。

还有一种翻译法是:
As for a knowledge point, if the difference between the score evaluated by a user and the weighted average score exceeds a certain range of the confidence interval,we consider the evaluated socre from this user is unreasonable and his/her domain weight should be reduced by punishment according to that difference.

请高手帮忙润色修改。谢谢!
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爱与雨下(金币+1): 请指明,不要含糊,交流吗! 2011-08-17 21:46:51
happymusic(金币+3, 翻译EPI+1): 2011-08-18 16:07:47
If the diviation between the score evaluated by a user and the weighted average score of a knowledge point exceeds a certain range of the confidential interval,we consider that the evaluated socre from the user is unreasonable and that his/her domain weight should be reduced according to the extent of the diviation as a punishment.  
楼上句型挺好,感觉有些词语用法欠妥。
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happymusic(金币+2): 2011-08-18 16:07:54
楼主译得已经很好了!微调如下:
If the difference between the score evaluated by a user and the weighted average score of a knowledge point exceeds a certain range of the confidence interval,we consider that the evaluated socre from the user is unreasonable and that his/her domain weight should be reduced by punishment according to the extent of the difference.
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