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happymusic铜虫 (小有名气)
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一个假设的翻译，求帮忙润色
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Assumption. If the difference between the score,evaluated by a user, of a knowledge point and the weighted average score of it exceeds a certain range of the confidence interval, we consider the user’s evaluation is unreasonable and his domain weight should be reduced by punishment according to that difference. 我想表达意思是： 假设：如果一个用户给一个知识点的分值，与这个知识点所得到的加权平均分值，的差异超过了一定的置信区间，我们就认为这个用户对此知识点的评价不合理，他的领域权重就应该依照其差异程度惩罚而减小. 感觉我的英文写的不够清晰，特别是其中it的指代问题。 还有一种翻译法是： As for a knowledge point, if the difference between the score evaluated by a user and the weighted average score exceeds a certain range of the confidence interval，we consider the evaluated socre from this user is unreasonable and his/her domain weight should be reduced by punishment according to that difference. 请高手帮忙润色修改。谢谢！ |
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happymusic(金币+2): 2011-08-18 16:07:54
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楼主译得已经很好了！微调如下： If the difference between the score evaluated by a user and the weighted average score of a knowledge point exceeds a certain range of the confidence interval，we consider that the evaluated socre from the user is unreasonable and that his/her domain weight should be reduced by punishment according to the extent of the difference. |
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爱与雨下(金币+1): 请指明，不要含糊，交流吗！ 2011-08-17 21:46:51
happymusic(金币+3, 翻译EPI+1): 2011-08-18 16:07:47
爱与雨下(金币+1): 请指明，不要含糊，交流吗！ 2011-08-17 21:46:51
happymusic(金币+3, 翻译EPI+1): 2011-08-18 16:07:47
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If the diviation between the score evaluated by a user and the weighted average score of a knowledge point exceeds a certain range of the confidential interval，we consider that the evaluated socre from the user is unreasonable and that his/her domain weight should be reduced according to the extent of the diviation as a punishment. 楼上句型挺好，感觉有些词语用法欠妥。 |
3楼2011-08-16 17:08:43