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[求助] 审稿人的这句话是什么意思？怪！急！！！

审稿人的这句话：
The conclusions should be written in an independent way to be easier for readers to follow.
什么意思呢？我的文章 conclusions 部分已经是一个单独的段落了，怎么又是独立的方式呢？

附：（我手稿中 conclusions 部分的全文）
4. Conclusions
In preparation of new derivatives with potential biological activity, we synthesized the title derivatives with an efficient, novel and simpler procedure. The molecular structures of 1 and 2 •H2O were determined by single crystal X-ray method. Their conformations are analogous to those of some reported diarylquinolin derivatives. In spite of the aforementioned slightly conformational discrepancies, the optimized geometric bond lengths and bond angles obtained by using DFT from computational point of view are generally closer to X-ray diffraction values as seen in Table 3, which further support the solid-state structures. Henceforth, the computed results with only reasonable deviations from the experimental values seem feasible. Although the anti-tuberculosis activities are poorer than the standard drugs, the structural elucidation obtained by this paper could contribute to understanding molecular structures and especially discovering better anti-tubercular inhibitors of the substituted diarylquinoline derivatives.

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7楼: Originally posted by baiyuefei at 2011-08-09 12:54:02:
能否具体点呢？是我把conclisions里面的内容分部分地独立地表达吗？即：把这congclusions的一大段再分成几个小段写吗？

感觉一般的文章的Conclusion部分基本上就是一个段落，一段话吧。

我也曾经收到过这样的review,你别着急。