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[求助] 审稿人的这句话是什么意思?怪!急!!!

审稿人的这句话:
The conclusions should be written in an independent way to be easier for readers to follow.
什么意思呢?我的文章 conclusions 部分已经是一个单独的段落了,怎么又是独立的方式呢?

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4. Conclusions
In preparation of new derivatives with potential biological activity, we synthesized the title derivatives with an efficient, novel and simpler procedure. The molecular structures of 1 and 2 •H2O were determined by single crystal X-ray method. Their conformations are analogous to those of some reported diarylquinolin derivatives. In spite of the aforementioned slightly conformational discrepancies, the optimized geometric bond lengths and bond angles obtained by using DFT from computational point of view are generally closer to X-ray diffraction values as seen in Table 3, which further support the solid-state structures. Henceforth, the computed results with only reasonable deviations from the experimental values seem feasible. Although the anti-tuberculosis activities are poorer than the standard drugs, the structural elucidation obtained by this paper could contribute to understanding molecular structures and especially discovering better anti-tubercular inhibitors of the substituted diarylquinoline derivatives.

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3楼: Originally posted by leimiao_hit at 2011-08-09 12:48:35:
不是独立的段落,而是独立的方式来表达你 的结论;

能否具体点呢? 是我把conclisions里面的内容分部分地独立地表达吗?即:把这congclusions的一大段再分成几个小段写吗?

感觉一般的文章的Conclusion部分基本上就是一个段落,一段话吧。
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你理解错了,不是独立的段落
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不是独立的段落,而是独立的方式来表达你 的结论;
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让你按点来写结论,有个顺序编号最好,如果写不开就分段。
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