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The paper takes a typical electroplating enterprise in Shenzhen, one of the most developed coastal cities of China, as the case, and analyses the difficulties of adopting CP from the enterprise’s point of view by a SD model
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dxiaoqing(金币+5, 翻译EPI+1): xiexie,把二位的意见综合了一下 2011-07-21 09:52:02
Mally89(金币+1): 感谢应助！~ 2011-07-23 21:29:29

This work took a typical electroplating enterprise as a study case, which is located in Shenzhen, one of the most developed coastal cities of China. The difficulties of adopting CP from the enterprise’s point of view was analyzed by a SD model.

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Mally89(金币+1): 感谢应助！~ 2011-07-23 21:29:38

By taking a typical electroplating enterprise in Shenzhen, one of the most developed coastal cities of China, as the case, difficulties of adopting CP were analyzed from the enterprise’s point of view by a SD model in this paper.

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