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请帮忙修改一下这段英文，一个亲戚的小孩要参加儿童英语比赛
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| My favorite food I like many good food: fish 、cake、candy、milk、fruits、 egg …… I like fish,because it's beautiful and yummy (美味的;香喷喷的).I have much milk everyday.Milk is alibility. It can make me tall. I eat many kinds of fruits. They are pears, watermelons, apples, bananas, strawberries and so on. But I like strawberries best. Strawberries look beautiful and taste very nice . specially,my grandmother usually buys strawberries to me. In one word, fruits are good for our health . But I don’t like vegetables. In future I’ll eat more and more vegetables. What do you like? Thank you! |
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econy(金币+3, 翻译EPI+1): good 2011-05-19 21:02:12
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My favorite food I like many good food: fish 、cake、candy、milk、fruits、 egg …… I like fish,because it's （beautiful and这个去掉吧？感觉鱼用来吃好像和美丽没啥关系吧？） yummy (美味的;香喷喷的). I （have much=drink）milk everyday. Milk is alibility（没看明白这句话要说什么）. It can make me tall. I eat many kinds of fruits （. They are=just like） pears, watermelons, apples, bananas, strawberries and so on. (s都可以去掉，减轻孩子负担，省的某个忘加了)But I like strawberries best. Strawberries look beautiful and taste very nice. （specially=especially）,my grandmother usually buys strawberries （to=for） me. In （one=可以改为a，好记一些，但这样用也行） word, fruits are good for our health . But I don’t like vegetables. （So）In future I’ll eat more and more vegetables. What do you like? Thank you! 还有一点儿，lz没有说清楚是多大的小孩子。尽量是小孩子觉得简单好记，顺口就行，只要没有大的语法错误就行 |
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econy(金币+5): better 2011-05-19 21:02:22
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My favorite food I like many good food: fish 、cake、candy、milk、fruits（我觉得这个s可以去掉）、 egg …… I like fish,because it's （beautiful and这个去掉吧？感觉鱼用来吃好像和美丽没啥关系吧？可以换个nutrient） yummy (美味的;香喷喷的). I （have much=drink）milk everyday. Milk can make me strong and tall. I eat many kinds of fruits （. They are=just like） pears, watermelons, apples, bananas, strawberries and so on. (s都可以去掉，减轻孩子负担，省的某个忘加了) But I like strawberries（用单数吧，9岁的孩子容易忘） best. Strawberries look beautiful and taste very nice. （specially=especially）,my grandmother usually buys strawberries （to=for） me. In （one=可以改为a，好记一些，但这样用也行） word, fruits are good for our health. But （what a pity,）I don’t like vegetables. （So）In future I (’ll=must,这个词好记而且标明了自己的决心)eat more and more vegetables. What do you like?（这句话放这儿感觉没啥用吧） Thank you! 这些词都蛮简单的，9岁的孩子应该都能记住！~ [ Last edited by Mally89 on 2011-5-19 at 20:27 ] |
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