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econy(金币+3, 翻译EPI+1): good 2011-05-19 21:02:12
My favorite food
I like many good food: fish 、cake、candy、milk、fruits、 egg ……
I like fish,because it's （beautiful and这个去掉吧？感觉鱼用来吃好像和美丽没啥关系吧？） yummy (美味的;香喷喷的).
I （have much=drink）milk everyday. Milk is alibility（没看明白这句话要说什么）. It can make me tall.
I eat many kinds of fruits （. They are=just like） pears, watermelons, apples, bananas, strawberries and so on. (s都可以去掉，减轻孩子负担，省的某个忘加了)But I like strawberries best. Strawberries look beautiful and taste very nice. （specially=especially）,my grandmother usually buys strawberries （to=for） me. In （one=可以改为a，好记一些，但这样用也行） word, fruits are good for our health . But I don’t like vegetables. （So）In future I’ll eat more and more vegetables. What do you like? Thank you!
还有一点儿，lz没有说清楚是多大的小孩子。尽量是小孩子觉得简单好记，顺口就行，只要没有大的语法错误就行 |
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