[交流] 求助润色，谢谢先

Originally posted by zerohead at 2011-03-08 12:00:59:
你说“点1减去点2, 消去平移量t后可得到式4”这句中文通顺吗？

Originally posted by dongzh311 at 2011-03-07 20:12:10:
p=Rq+t (式1)。
If there are two pares of points (p1,q1) and (p2,q2),  after eliminating the translations by Eq. (1), the combined form is
p1-p2=R(q1-q2) (这是equation 4 )
审稿人意见：It is obvio ...

Originally posted by zerohead at 2011-03-07 21:15:54:
审稿人的意思是你的文字部分的描述，跟公式的物理意义不相符，你要再看看文章的内容的写法。