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[交流] 帮润色两句材料类的翻译(英译中),非常感谢。

第一句:
The mechanical behaviors of metallic material are largely affected by the defects, such as dislocation and grain boundary, closely related to the atomic structure。

翻译:与原子结构密切相关的缺陷,如位错和晶界,极大的影响金属材料的力学行为。

第二句:
In coarse-grained metals, plastic deformation is mainly carried by dislocations—line defects of the regular crystal lattice—within the individual grains. Dislocations can move through the crystal grains and can interact with each other. Grain boundaries often hinder their transmission, creating a dislocation pile-up at the boundary and thereby making the material harder to deform.
翻译:在大晶粒组成的金属中,塑性变形主要由单个晶粒中的位错来实现。位错能通过晶粒移动,并彼此相互作用。晶界通常阻碍晶粒运动和在晶界处产生位错缠结,使得材料很难变形。

翻译得不专业,也不简明扼要,也不通顺!
请高手帮忙润色(最好能达到出版论文中语句的标准)!
非常感谢!
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小兰花(金币+7, 翻译EPI+1): 翻译得很专业,非常感谢! 2011-02-23 20:39:53

The mechanical behaviors of metallic material are largely affected by the defects, such as dislocation and grain boundary, closely related to the atomic structure。

金属材料的力学行为,主要受如位错和晶界等缺陷的影响,而这些缺陷又和原子结构有着密切关系。
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小兰花(金币+6): 翻译得很棒,谢谢您的帮忙! 2011-02-23 20:40:29

In coarse-grained metals, plastic deformation is mainly carried by dislocations—line defects of the regular crystal lattice—within the individual grains.

由大晶粒组成的金属,塑性变形主要来源于个别晶粒中的位错。
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