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The cooling rule of the fluid for different cooling time is an important consideration in the design of the crude oil storage tanks. In recent years considerable research efforts have been devoted to the study of thermal behavior of the fluid in the storage tank. One-dimensional mathematical model of analyzing the temperature distribution of the liquid in the tank was established (Gari and Loehrke, 1982). The changing rule of the temperature of the oil in the tank with the changing of the inlet temperature was studied in depth (Hamdan et al ,1992). The transient thermal behavior of storage system based on Chapeau-Galerkin integral formulation was investigated (Al-Najem and El-Refaee, 1997). The effect of the tank geometry on the thermal behavior of the heat storage was analyzed (Eames and Norton, 1998). The cooling rule of the fluid in the cylindrical tank under the condition of natural convention was analyzed (Lin and Armfield, 1999). The natural convention in the cylindrical enclosure was studied (Papanicolaou and Belessiotis,2002). The experimental analysis of the thermal performance for a hot water storage tank was carried out (Fernandez-Seara et al, 2007).

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The cooling rule of the fluid for different cooling time is an important consideration(factor) in the design of the crude oil storage tanks. In recent years considerable research efforts have been devoted to the study of thermal behavior of the fluid in the storage tank. One-dimensional mathematical model of analyzing the temperature distribution of the liquid in the tank was established (Gari and Loehrke, 1982). The changing rule of the temperature of the oil in the tank with the changing(change) of the inlet temperature was studied in depth (or in more details)(Hamdan et al ,1992). The transient thermal behavior of storage system based on Chapeau-Galerkin integral formulation was investigated (Al-Najem and El-Refaee, 1997). The effect of the tank geometry on the thermal behavior of the heat storage was analyzed (Eames and Norton, 1998). The cooling rule of the fluid in the cylindrical tank under the condition of natural convention was analyzed (Lin and Armfield, 1999). The natural convention in the cylindrical enclosure was studied (Papanicolaou and Belessiotis,2002). The experimental analysis of the thermal performance for a hot water storage tank was carried out (Fernandez-Seara et al, 2007).
确实没有严重的语法错误,个人意见如下:
The cooling rule of the fluid for different cooling time is an important factor in the design of the crude oil storage tanks.In recent years considerable research efforts have been devoted to the study of thermal behavior of the fluid in the storage tank.One-dimensional mathematical model of analyzing the temperature distribution of the liquid in the tank was established (Gari and Loehrke, 1982). The changing rule of the temperature of the oil in the tank with the change of the inlet temperature was studied  in more details(Hamdan et al ,1992). The transient thermal behavior of storage system based on Chapeau-Galerkin integral formulation was investigated (Al-Najem and El-Refaee, 1997), and also The effect of the tank geometry on the thermal behavior of the heat storage (Eames and Norton, 1998),the cooling rule of the fluid in the cylindrical tank under the condition of natural convention (Lin and Armfield, 1999),the natural convention in the cylindrical enclosure (Papanicolaou and Belessiotis,2002), the experimental analysis of the thermal performance for a hot water storage tank (Fernandez-Seara et al, 2007).
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The cooling rule of the fluid for different cooling time is an important factor in the design of the crude oil storage tanks.In recent years considerable research efforts have been devoted to the study of thermal behavior of the fluid in the storage tank.One-dimensional mathematical model of analyzing the temperature distribution of the liquid in the tank was established (Gari and Loehrke, 1982). The changing rule of the temperature of the oil in the tank with the change of the inlet temperature was studied  in more details(Hamdan et al ,1992). The transient thermal behavior of storage system based on Chapeau-Galerkin integral formulation was investigated (Al-Najem and El-Refaee, 1997), and also The effect of the tank geometry on the thermal behavior of the heat storage (Eames and Norton, 1998),the cooling rule of the fluid in the cylindrical tank under the condition of natural convention (Lin and Armfield, 1999),the natural convention in the cylindrical enclosure (Papanicolaou and Belessiotis,2002), and the experimental analysis of the thermal performance for a hot water storage tank (Fernandez-Seara et al, 2007).
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