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More than 50000 children have been hospitalized and six have died because of kidney damage caused by melamine in China in 2008.

上面这句话语法上有没有不对的地方?谢谢!
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slimcat(金币+1):谢谢参与
sounds ok
but die is not used as pp
you can use died instead of have died~


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slimcat(金币+1): 2011-01-13 13:10:34
Sounds a good one.
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slimcat(金币+1): 2011-01-13 13:10:48
seems something is wrong~
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slimcat(金币+1): 2011-01-13 13:10:52
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Originally posted by nono2009 at 2011-01-13 11:42:24:
Sounds a good one.

I agree...
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