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More than 50000 children have been hospitalized and six have died because of kidney damage caused by melamine in China in 2008.

上面这句话语法上有没有不对的地方?谢谢!
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slimcat(金币+1): 2011-01-13 13:10:34
Sounds a good one.
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slimcat(金币+1): 2011-01-13 13:10:48
seems something is wrong~
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slimcat(金币+1): 2011-01-13 13:10:52
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Originally posted by nono2009 at 2011-01-13 11:42:24:
Sounds a good one.

I agree...
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slimcat(金币+2): 2011-01-13 13:10:58
More than 50000 children had been hospitalized and six of them died because of kidney damage caused by melamine in China in 2008.
look at this one, we can discuss with each other.
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slimcat(金币+2): 2011-01-13 13:11:08
More than 50000 children have been hospitalized and six have died because of kidney are damaged by melamine in China in 2008.
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Originally posted by slimcat at 2011-01-13 06:40:30:
More than 50000 children have been hospitalized and six have died because of kidney damage caused by melamine in China in 2008.

上面这句话语法上有没有不对的地方?谢谢!

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slimcat

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Originally posted by xuanxuankaoyan at 2011-01-13 12:36:13:
More than 50000 children had been hospitalized and six of them died because of kidney damage caused by melamine in China in 2008.
look at this one, we can discuss with each other.

Thank you!
It looks like better than the above.

[ Last edited by slimcat on 2011-1-13 at 13:15 ]
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slimcat

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Originally posted by 兰蝴蝶 at 2011-01-13 12:21:04:
seems something is wrong~

Use "have" or "had", I am not sure.

[ Last edited by slimcat on 2011-1-13 at 13:11 ]
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slimcat

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Originally posted by slimcat at 2011-01-13 13:04:15:

Use "have" or "had", I am not sure.

I think 2008 is the past year, maybe we should use "had", what is your opinion?
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slimcat(金币+1):谢谢参与
I think use "have" is right.
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Originally posted by slimcat at 2011-01-13 08:04:15:

Use "have" or "had", I am not sure.

[ Last edited by slimcat on 2011-1-13 at 13:11 ]

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slimcat(金币+1):谢谢参与
sounds ok
but die is not used as pp
you can use died instead of have died~


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But for now 2008 is gone,
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Originally posted by slimcat at 2011-01-13 08:09:30:

I think 2008 is the past year, maybe we should use "had", what is your opinion?

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五四青年

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This sentence is grammatically correct if it was written in 2008. Otherwise, it is better to use the simple past tense.

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slimcat

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Originally posted by 五四青年 at 2011-01-13 15:10:30:
This sentence is grammatically correct if it was written in 2008. Otherwise, it is better to use the simple past tense.

[ Last edited by 五四青年 on 2011-1-13 at 15:12 ]

Thanks!
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