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luolei1222

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[交流] 求助,第一次投稿,审稿人的意见,是退稿的意思,还是有修改价值的意思呀 已有6人参与

求助,第一次投稿,审稿人的意见,是退稿的意思,还是有修改价值的意思呀,我投的是liquid crystals 杂志

审稿人意见:
Referee(s)' Comments to Author:Referee: 1Comments to the AuthorI am totally confused by this paper.  The authors seem to rub a bare ITO surface, and then claim that rubbing produced homeotropic alignment.  This is counterintuitive, since rubbing normally produces planar  alignment.  They then go on to talk about VA (vertical alignment), but yet their experimental geometry is for  a planar-aligned cell.  Other specific problems:
1. The cholestreric LC has dissolved CTAB.   This certainly will affect the  anchoring.  How much CTAB is in the mixture?  Is it controlled?

2. What is the pitch of the CLC?  How does it vary with temperature?

3. CLCs normally give fingerprint or Grandjean textures, not focal conics.  Please explain.  Also, how does the pitch and orientation vary with electric field?

4. Each variable in equation 1 (and following) needs to be defined in the text.

5. I have no idea what the middle paragraph on page 6 is saying.  The authors write "Various cells were measured, the results were almost the same. Anchoring energy ofthe rubbed cells is large than that of the non-rubbed ones."  The second sentence seems to be inconsistent with the first.

6. The decrease of anchoring strength with an increase in temperature is a result known for nearly 30 years.  The authors need to include references.

The manuscript is very, very confusing, and it's not clear to me that the experiments were conducted with the required care to draw any significant conclusions. This paper will need a near total rewrite before it can be considered for publication.  I also suggest that the authors find a colleague who is more  fluent in English to help with the writing;  perhaps some of my confusion stems from the less-than-adequate use of English.

现在求助大家,真不知道这篇论文还有没有修改价值了
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你不肯定没有,就有。看看最后一段,应该是表达很不清楚。
2楼2010-11-19 09:48:00
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看看编辑的意思啊
编辑让修改就有希望,编辑说拒那就拒了!
3楼2010-11-19 11:23:14
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lwiaanngg

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好好改了,表述清楚自己的成果有时比你做出什么样的更重要
4楼2010-11-19 11:28:53
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very, very confusing啊 论文要想发表还需要质的提高
5楼2010-11-19 11:33:07
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mafeifeifei7

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找个牛人带修改一下,果断改投
异乡寒冷的路;狂野的心
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