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网络上流传的翻译： Down by the salley gardens my love and I did meet; 在莎莉花园深处，吾爱与我曾经相遇。 She passed the salley gardens with little snow-white feet. 她穿越莎莉花园，以雪白的小脚。 She bid me take love easy, as the leaves grow on the tree; 她嘱咐我要爱得轻松，当新叶在枝桠萌芽。 But I, being young and foolish, with her would not agree. 但我当年年幼无知，不予轻率苟同。 In a field by the river my love and I did stand, 在河边的田野，吾爱与我曾经驻足。 And on my leaning shoulder she laid her snow-white hand. 她依靠在我的肩膀，以雪白的小手。 She bid me take life easy, as the grass grows on the weirs; 她嘱咐我要活得轻松，当青草在堤岸滋长。 But I was young and foolish, and now am full of tears. 但我当年年幼无知，而今热泪盈眶。 上面是在网上搜到的，呵呵，解决了几个听不懂的单词，不过好像有点错，就是那句with her would not agree好像是did才对 至于上面的中文翻译，我有点不赞同，呵呵，又重新翻译了一下 我的翻译是这样的： Down by the salley gardens my love and I did meet; 莎莉花园，吾爱与享共 She passed the salley gardens with little snow-white feet. 伊人过处，犹可寻芳踪 She bid me take love easy, as the leaves grow on the tree; 告之当年绿叶处，世间情有几分重 But I, being young and foolish, with her did not agree. 只叹年少不知事，自恃箴言轻不同 In a field down by the river my love and I did stand, 流水畔，恋人双 And on my leaning shoulder she laid her snow-white hand. 肩顷为纤指，伊人依在旁 She bid me take life easy, as the grass grows on the weirs; 命无为，堰草茫 But I was young and foolish, and now I am full of tears. 尤记当年语，而今泪轻狂 不知有没有人喜欢我的翻译风格，由于不经常上网，嘿嘿，留下电子邮件，同志者可联系wangyongzhangchao@163.com.cn |
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