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fuhuo

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[交流] Materials and Design技术审查意见 已有1人参与

本人第一次投递英文文章,有好多不清楚,这是技术审查后的结果:
Thank you for submitting your work to Materials and Design. Before we pass on manuscripts to the Journal Editor, who is responsible for the scientific assessment, we perform an initial check against formal technical criteria (structure of submission, adherence to the Guide for Authors and English language usage).

We regret to inform you that your manuscript does not meet the journal's required standard. Please make changes/corrections as detailed in the comments below.

When you resubmit your manuscript, please also provide a separate sheet listing your responses to the problems that were raised and upload it under the submission item 'Responses to Technical Check Results'. A sample of the "Responses" sheet can be found at: http://www.elsevierscitech.com/l ... Technical_Check.pdf
We regret that without a completed "Responses" sheet, your manuscript will not be further processed.

Before resubmitting your manuscript, please make sure that every aspect of the manuscript is in accordance with the Guide for Authors which is available at http://ees.elsevier.com/jmad/ top of screen.

PLEASE NOTE: Resubmission is not a guarantee that your submission will subsequently proceed to the peer review process, which is a decision to be made at the sole discretion of the journal editor.

Yours sincerely,
Helen Whyte
Journal Manager
Materials and Design

Comments:

1) A maximum of 3 keywords should be selected from the list of "Keywords for Indexing" which is printed in each journal issue and also available on the journal homepage. And each keyword should be accompanied by the capital letter denoting the category from which the keyword has been selected.

2) Please note, Research Highlights must be formatted as follows:
- a list containing 3-5 bullet points
- with a maximum of 85 characters per bullet point, including spaces.

**********************************************************************************************************************
      是不是Comments中这两点不符合要求,要求文中的关键词要在期刊要求的里面选几个。这封信中没有提到英语问题,是不是说英文没有问题?
Dear editor,
Thank you for your useful comments and suggestions on the language and the structure
of our manuscript. We have modified the manuscript accordingly, and the detailed
corrections are listed below point by point:
1) In its current state, the level of English throughout your manuscript does not
meet the journal's required standard. Authors have the responsibility to
present their papers in good English which can be understood by the journal's
readership.
􀀹 We revised the WHOLE manuscript carefully to avoid language errors. In
addition, we asked several colleagues who are skilled authors to check
the English. We believe that the language is now acceptable for the
review process.
2) Please note that your abstract (250 words) exceeds the maximum length of 150
words for research article.
􀀹 The abstract has been revised and the word count is now 149.
3) Figures should be cited sequentially in the text. Fig. 6 is provided, but not
cited; please check and revise accordingly.
􀀹 Now all figures are provided and cited sequentially in the text.
4) The cover letter provided should include the following: the manuscript has not
been previously published, is not currently submitted for review to any other
journal, and will not be submitted elsewhere before one decision is made.
􀀹 The required information has been included in the cover letter.
5) Type the whole manuscript with uniform lettering and sizing, and with double
line spacing, including references, figure captions and tables.
􀀹 We have typed the whole manuscript in uniform lettering and sizing, and
with double line spacing.
6) Please note that the reference list must conform strictly to the Guide for
Authors. Journal names should be abbreviated and page span should be provided.
􀀹 We have checked all the references and formatted them strictly according
to the Guide for Authors. Especially the journal names have been
abbreviated and page span provided.
    这是后来生成的一个PDF,这6点的要后,都以恢复,且回复前都有一个对号,是不是说明这6点没有问题。
    从这两封信看来,论文在技术审查环节就是2点小错误吗???希望高给与指点一下!!!谢谢大家。。。。。。。。
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Originally posted by fuhuo at 2010-10-22 21:36:01:
是的,要材料方面的,效率很高,比中国的快多了。

呵呵 计算材料?vasp计算??第一性原理相关计算的材料学文章,接受吗?谢谢你给的币!
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fuhuo(金币+2):谢谢你,我已经通过技术审查,谢谢 2010-10-22 11:12:10
只需要修改两点就行了,comments里面没有提到的不用管!
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fuhuo(金币+1):祝你好运 2010-10-23 15:17:29
materials & design这个要计算材料方面的文章吗??我准备投稿了 !打听一下!
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是的,要材料方面的,效率很高,比中国的快多了。
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