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The acetonitrile-water system has received considerable attention during the last decade from both the theoretical and experimental points of view as a very important model for understanding binary mixtures leading to powerful solvents with applications in chemistry and environment studies.
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ouyangshunli(金币+4, 翻译EPI+1): 2010-09-07 14:13:25
这样子:)
拆句子:During the last decade,the acetonitrile-water system has drawn considerable attention from both the theoretical and experimental points of view. Because it is a very important model for understanding binary mixtures which can lead to powerful solvents with applications in chemistry and environment studies.
或者变个清晰地长句:
During the last decade,The acetonitrile-water system,as a very important model for understanding binary mixtures, which, can lead to powerful solvents with applications in chemistry and environment studies, has drawn considerable attention from both the theoretical and experimental points of view.
吸引attention最好还是用draw~
2楼2010-09-07 10:14:22
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ouyangshunli(金币+3): 2010-09-07 14:13:37
During the last decade, the acetonitrile-water system has received considerable attention from both the theoretical and experimental points of view as a very important model for understanding binary mixtures, which lead to powerful solvents with applications in chemistry and environment studies.
3楼2010-09-07 10:15:27
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ouyangshunli(金币+2): 2010-09-07 14:14:01
As both a theoretically and experimentally important model for understanding binary mixtures which leads to powerful solvents with applications in chemistry and environment studies, the acetonitrile-water system has received considerable attention during the last decade.
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4楼2010-09-07 10:18:00
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ouyangshunli(金币+1): 2010-09-07 14:14:07
The acetonitrile-water system has received considerable attention during the last decade  from both the theoretical and experimental points of view.It is a very important model for understanding binary mixtures.The mixtures lead to powerful solvents with applications in chemistry and environment studies.
改的不好,见谅!
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