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[交流] 这句话是否与语法错误?

TEM enables much higher magnification of the product activated carbon has been carried out.

文章返修了,审稿人的问题里面提到这句话有语法错误需要修改,可是我不知道错在哪里,各位大虾提点意见,谢谢!
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charleygan

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看不懂这句英文的逻辑结构,能否提供中文原话?
2楼2010-09-01 11:14:13
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zengjianfeng(金币+1, 翻译EPI+1): 2010-09-01 13:47:07
zengjianfeng(金币+4): 2010-09-01 15:52:33
TEM enables much higher magnification of the product activated carbon has been carried out.

enable、has been这里两个谓语,应该是这地方不对吧。

个人观点:TEM enables much higher magnification of the product activated carbon having been carried out.
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3楼2010-09-01 11:17:27
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zengjianfeng(金币+1): 2010-09-01 13:48:12
zengjianfeng(金币+2): 2010-09-01 15:52:43
TEM enables much higher magnification of the product activated carbon has been carried out.

enable、has been这里两个谓语,应该是这地方不对吧。


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TEM enables much higher magnification of the product that activated carbon have been carried out.
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4楼2010-09-01 12:13:29
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zengjianfeng(金币+1): 2010-09-01 13:48:58
zengjianfeng(金币+1): 2010-09-01 15:52:47
同意楼上的观点,一个句子有连个谓语是不对的。
除了nickeluan的修改之外,也有可能是has been做谓语:
TEM enables  much higher magnification of the product activated carbon. That conclusion has been carried out.

或者用如下一句话表达
That TEM enables  much higher magnification of the product activated carbon  has been carried out.
我也不清楚这种结构是否正确,欢迎指点
5楼2010-09-01 12:57:06
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zengjianfeng

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看到楼上的意见,我想把这句话改成

With much higher magnification, TEM has been carried out to exam the microstructure of the product activated carbon.

不知道是否可以?
6楼2010-09-01 13:46:46
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