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When the Vc concentration decreases from 7.2 mmol/L to 1.4 mmol/L, changes in size and thickness can be evidently observed from Figure 2C.
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I think you could add a " the" before "changes in size". That would be better.
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When the Vc concentration decreased from 7.2 mmol/L to 1.4 mmol/L, the size and thickness of *** changed evidently, as shown in Figure 2C.
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xia_chong(金币+5):Thank you very much! You have a good knowledge of English. I gain knowledge. :D Have a nice day! 2010-08-20 08:06:14
1. changes in size and thickness.
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Missing article and logically unclear! The corresponding or induced changes.

2. observed from Figure 2C
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This phenomena was observed in the experiment and the result is shown in figure.

3. Tense
____________
The experiment has been done. So it happened, not happens.

4. Chinese-English expression
_______________
The structure could be better.
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Originally posted by plum8736 at 2010-08-20 08:48:32:

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Originally posted by 秦中中 at 2010-12-02 16:28:15:
I hate gramma, always

i hate gramma also
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Originally posted by robiwang at 2010-08-20 00:05:54:
When the Vc concentration decreased from 7.2 mmol/L to 1.4 mmol/L, the size and thickness of *** changed evidently, as shown in Figure 2C.

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