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小兰花

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[交流] 求助润色或翻译一段话 (80字),谢谢!

棒状第二相粒子比球形第二相粒子对晶粒长大的钉扎效果更好,棒状第二相粒子的空间取向方向对钉扎效果也有很多影响:多个空间取向棒状第二相粒子的钉扎效果好于一个空间取向棒状第二相粒子。

翻译:
       Disk second-phase particles are more effective than Spherical second-phase particles in the pinning effect on grain growth, while the directional orientation of these disk second-phase particles have big effect on pinning and different geometric orientations stick SPP are more effective than one geometric orientation stick SPP for retarding grain growth.

请高手帮润色一下,谢谢
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hust_gaoyi

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小兰花(金币+6, 翻译EPI+1):翻译得很好,谢谢高手帮忙! 这段话会在文章出现两次,所以还得2种表达方式! 2010-07-07 09:25:36
Disk second-phase particle has a better performance than Spherical second-phase particle in the pinning effect on grain growth. The directional orientation of a disk second-phase particle is also an influencing factor to pinning effect. A disk second-phase particle with multiple directional orientations causes better pining effect than that with only one directional orientation.
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小兰花

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这段话会在文章出现两次,所以需要2种不同的表达方式!
哪位高手再帮提供一种 经典的翻译!
非常感谢!
3楼2010-07-07 09:26:41
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hust_gaoyi

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小兰花(金币+6):hust_gaoyi,您翻译得很棒! 非常感谢。 如果现在还有空的话,再帮我润色一段翻译,内容与这个相似。链接:http://emuch.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=2199902 2010-07-07 10:03:07
你的金币都散完了,估计没其他人会再翻译了,所以我好人做到底吧。。。

Compared with the spherical second-phase particle, the disk second-phase particle can exhibit better performance in the pinning effect on grain growth. As for the disk second-phase particle, the directional orientation has also impact on pinning effect. With multiple directional orientations, the disk second-phase particle can achieve better pining effect over that with one directional orientations.
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