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hyzjl1985

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7.5
         I will go on my diary in this post,and please point it out if there is any wrong .
I did a expriment and the results are good as expected.What a happy thing.It encouraged me to work hard though it was very hot.
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Originally posted by hyzjl1985 at 2010-07-05 19:05:10:
7.5
         I will go on my diary in this post,and please point it out if there is any wrong .
I did a expriment and the results are good as expected.What a happy thing.It encouraged me to work  ...

I did an expriment
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2Â¥2010-07-05 19:12:43
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i green with you.
3Â¥2010-07-05 19:42:31
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hyzjl1985

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Originally posted by fangye0413 at 2010-07-05 19:12:43:

I did an expriment

thank you  very much
4Â¥2010-07-05 20:01:09
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Originally posted by hyzjl1985 at 2010-07-05 19:05:10:
7.5
         I will go on my diary in this post,and please point it out if there is any wrong .
I did a expriment and the results are good as expected.What a happy thing.It encouraged me to work  ...

I will go on my diary in this post,
>> I will go on writing my diary in this post.

and please point it out if there is any wrong .
>>and please point out anything wrong.

I did a expriment
>> I did an experiment( mind your spelling!)

and the results are good as expected.
>> and the results were as good as expected.(mind the tense)

What a happy thing.
>> right! But if you change "." into "!", that would be better! LOL~

It encouraged me to work hard though it was very hot.
>>right! But if you change "hard" into "harder", that would be better!

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Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves!
5Â¥2010-07-06 13:43:16
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hyzjl1985

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Originally posted by xia_chong at 2010-07-06 13:43:16:



I will go on my diary in this post,
>> I will go on writing my diary in this post.

and please point it out if there is any wrong .
>>and please point out anything wrong.

I ...

Thank you very much,and welcome to point out my mistakes!!!
6Â¥2010-07-06 17:30:57
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feisemo

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xia_chong(½ð±Ò+1):If you ofter come here and read post and write posts, your English will be improved! Have a good summer! 2010-07-06 22:21:22
My English is poor!I wish that one day i could like you !Oh my god!
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7Â¥2010-07-06 22:18:23
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8Â¥2010-07-07 12:33:11
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hyzjl1985

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7.6 A busy day
9Â¥2010-07-07 19:09:32
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hyzjl1985

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fangye0413(½ð±Ò+3):sorry,the BB is late~ 2010-08-04 11:32:58
7.7
I registered a English--learning website.There are members of all kinds of native language,so I can open my eyes and learn English .However, Iwill  visit this plate all the time.
Another thing pleasing me was that I earn 100yuan.I enjoyed the pleasure which was brought by knowledge.I always feel shamed becuase I can't convert what I learned to cash and be subsidized by my parents.Last summer vocation,I made money by tutoring.I didn't feel as happy as today.
After all,today was a happy day.


[ Last edited by hyzjl1985 on 2010-7-7 at 19:37 ]
10Â¥2010-07-07 19:32:42
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