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hyzjl1985

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7.5
         I will go on my diary in this post,and please point it out if there is any wrong .
I did a expriment and the results are good as expected.What a happy thing.It encouraged me to work hard though it was very hot.
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Originally posted by hyzjl1985 at 2010-07-05 19:05:10:
7.5
         I will go on my diary in this post,and please point it out if there is any wrong .
I did a expriment and the results are good as expected.What a happy thing.It encouraged me to work  ...

I did an expriment
我喜欢“在路上”的感觉。
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i green with you.
3楼2010-07-05 19:42:31
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hyzjl1985

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Originally posted by fangye0413 at 2010-07-05 19:12:43:

I did an expriment

thank you  very much
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Originally posted by hyzjl1985 at 2010-07-05 19:05:10:
7.5
         I will go on my diary in this post,and please point it out if there is any wrong .
I did a expriment and the results are good as expected.What a happy thing.It encouraged me to work  ...

I will go on my diary in this post,
>> I will go on writing my diary in this post.

and please point it out if there is any wrong .
>>and please point out anything wrong.

I did a expriment
>> I did an experiment( mind your spelling!)

and the results are good as expected.
>> and the results were as good as expected.(mind the tense)

What a happy thing.
>> right! But if you change "." into "!", that would be better! LOL~

It encouraged me to work hard though it was very hot.
>>right! But if you change "hard" into "harder", that would be better!

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Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves!
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hyzjl1985

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Originally posted by xia_chong at 2010-07-06 13:43:16:



I will go on my diary in this post,
>> I will go on writing my diary in this post.

and please point it out if there is any wrong .
>>and please point out anything wrong.

I ...

Thank you very much,and welcome to point out my mistakes!!!
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xia_chong(金币+1):If you ofter come here and read post and write posts, your English will be improved! Have a good summer! 2010-07-06 22:21:22
My English is poor!I wish that one day i could like you !Oh my god!
天生我材必有用
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hyzjl1985

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7.6 A busy day
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hyzjl1985

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fangye0413(金币+3):sorry,the BB is late~ 2010-08-04 11:32:58
7.7
I registered a English--learning website.There are members of all kinds of native language,so I can open my eyes and learn English .However, Iwill  visit this plate all the time.
Another thing pleasing me was that I earn 100yuan.I enjoyed the pleasure which was brought by knowledge.I always feel shamed becuase I can't convert what I learned to cash and be subsidized by my parents.Last summer vocation,I made money by tutoring.I didn't feel as happy as today.
After all,today was a happy day.


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