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I did a expriment and the results are good as expected.What a happy thing.It encouraged me to work hard though it was very hot.
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Originally posted by hyzjl1985 at 2010-07-05 19:05:10:
7.5
         I will go on my diary in this post,and please point it out if there is any wrong .
I did a expriment and the results are good as expected.What a happy thing.It encouraged me to work  ...

I did an expriment
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hyzjl1985

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Originally posted by fangye0413 at 2010-07-05 19:12:43:

I did an expriment

thank you  very much
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Originally posted by hyzjl1985 at 2010-07-05 19:05:10:
7.5
         I will go on my diary in this post,and please point it out if there is any wrong .
I did a expriment and the results are good as expected.What a happy thing.It encouraged me to work  ...

I will go on my diary in this post,
>> I will go on writing my diary in this post.

and please point it out if there is any wrong .
>>and please point out anything wrong.

I did a expriment
>> I did an experiment( mind your spelling!)

and the results are good as expected.
>> and the results were as good as expected.(mind the tense)

What a happy thing.
>> right! But if you change "." into "!", that would be better! LOL~

It encouraged me to work hard though it was very hot.
>>right! But if you change "hard" into "harder", that would be better!

[ Last edited by xia_chong on 2010-7-6 at 13:44 ]
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